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【小站名师】实例讲解雅思口语评分中Grammatical Range的杀伤力

2016年08月04日18:04 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:今天给大家带来小站老师Terri关于雅思口语评分中Grammatical Range杀伤力的实例讲解,希望大家看完之后,口语成绩能有进步!

雅思考试备考中,小烤鸭们一定有很多迷茫的时刻。有些烤鸭已经考过几次,甚至遇到非常相似的题目,不禁心中窃喜,然而看到成绩的时候,却一脸懵逼,为什么并没有提升,自觉并没有什么语法错误啊啊啊。。。然后来问我是不是要去复议。Well, before that, let’s firstly get a whole picture of what’s happening.

我们来看看雅思口语评分标准先。

【小站名师】实例讲解雅思口语评分中Grammatical Range的杀伤力图1

有些天真可爱的小烤鸭可能会以为,口语考试嘛,又不是写作,不用那么正式,否则考官认为我在背诵。而且表示看了很多美剧英剧,并没有很多高深的单词(lexical resource)或者复杂的句子,甚至都是短句,单词,各种省略。Terri老师只想说,真是图样图森破。

要时刻记住,这是考试(重要的事情只说一遍),不是随意地chat over coffee,不是和老友叙旧,它更像是一场个人英语show。所以烤鸭们要做的事就是花式展现自己的语法和词汇(连贯性和流利度是by-product,发音是另外一个话题)。

从评分标准可以看到对语法的要求有两个:range,accuracy(范围和精确度). 所以如果没有语法错误,但是都是简单句,单词,没有让考官知道你有说花式长短句的能力,well…

Terri老师接下来要和小烤鸭们语法多样性到底有多大杀伤力,准备好了吗。

好的语言让speech更加活泼流畅

如果一段话出现太多的单句会怎么样?---显示出speaker对英语句子结构缺乏驾驭能力

I want to understand the world. Therefore, I am interested in economics. I was born in 1980s. At that time, China said goodbye to communism. China wanted to save itself from the economic problems. With good reform policies, China had a great economic boom. This boom changed the life of every person. Such experience made me believe that we need to make our economic policies very well. Only in this way can we save the country from poverty and make a difference in people’s lives.

第一层次修改,体现逻辑

Because I want to understand the world. Therefore, I am interested in economics. I was born in 1980s. At that time, when China said goodbye to communism because China wanted to save itself from the economic problems. With good reform policies, China had a great economic boom. This boom that changed the life of every person. Such experience made me believe that we need to make our economic policies very well. Only in this way can we save the country from poverty and make a difference in people’s lives.

本次修改后,句子们不再是孤立的个体存在了,而是通过因果关系,时间状语从句,原因状语从句,形容词从句,宾语从句以及倒装句使得整段话有了逻辑和连贯性有木有。

第二层次修改,体现语言的流畅和用词的高端和地道

My interests in economics stemmed from a desire to understand the world. I was born in a time when China abandoned communism to rescue itself from the verge of economic collapse. With effective reform policies, China witnessed an unprecedented economic boom that changed the life of every individual. Such experience convinced me that a well-devised economic policy could not only save a country from poverty, but more importantly, it could make a difference in people’s lives.

再修改之后,

所以,语法多样性是非常重要的,可以说是背后真正的大boss,因为它会涉及到coherence,and logic.童鞋们在考试过程中一定要有意识地expand grammatical range来征服考官昂。

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