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【雅思考官】雅思口语part2实例:educational TV programme

编者按:今天给大家带来的是一篇关于教育性电视节目的雅思口语part2话题讲解,答案来自于前考官simon的博客。相信准备过雅思口语的同学一定不会对这个题目陌生,整体而言,这道题目是难度较大的。一起来看看考官是如何来回答的吧。

【话题: educational TV programme】

Describe an educational television programme that you liked.

You should say

- what the programme was about

- when and where you saw it

- how you found out about this programme

- and why you liked it

【9分考官答案】

I’m going to talk about one of my favourite educational TV programmes, which is a nature documentary called ‘Planet Earth’. There were eleven episodes of this programme, and each one featured a different habitat on Earth, such as mountains, caves, deserts and jungles. The aim of the ‘Planet Earth’ series was to take the viewer into those habitats, using spectacular footage of interesting animals, plants and landscapes.

小编点评:首句定语从句可谓先声夺人。高分词汇(其实都是简单词汇):episode, feature, habitat, take..into, spectacular footage, landscapes. 三句话分别讲了这个节目的基本信息,主要内容形式和节目的宗旨,可以说完美地回答了what the programme was about. 

I first saw ‘Planet Earth’ on television when it was broadcast by the BBC several years ago. I think it was shown every Sunday evening, which was the perfect time to watch a fascinating nature programme. Then, a few years a ago, somebody bought me the DVD box set of the whole series as a Christmas present, and I watched the episodes again.

小编点评:对于task response可以说很全面了,既有喜闻乐见,普普通通的前2句(还有模板的可能),又有最后1句的点睛,不经意间就讲了一个关于自己的圣诞礼物的故事,从而与模板性的答案完全划清了界限。 高分词句:考官对which的定语从句是很有偏好啊,但确实效果谁用谁知道。fascinating, bought...as, 

I found out about this TV programme because it was advertised repeatedly in the weeks before it was first aired. The TV trailers were really eye-catching because they showed incredibly beautiful images of nature. I also recognised the voice of the narrator of the programme, the well-known naturalist David Attenborough. It was these trailers that persuaded me to watch the first episode.

小编点评:found out about一定要注意是“找到,搞清楚”意思,不是让你评价这个节目(how do you think of...)。如果说前2段还只是小试牛刀,那么这一段开始,考官就是火力全开,开始了9分英语的狂飙了。4句话全部为复杂句,分别涉及到了because状语从句,because状语从句,同位语,强调句(it is...that...)。当然,学术口语中,原本就应该达到这用程度地表达。而细看词汇,当然也不简单,有air, narrator, naturalist, trailer等。不过整体而言,用词很简明,没有任何炫技的成分。

What I liked most about the ‘Planet Earth’ series was its stunning photography and its global scope. For example, in the “Fresh Water” episode, they showed us the giant salamander in Japan, crocodiles in the river Nile, and river dolphins in the Amazon. I was amazed at how they had managed to film such interesting creatures in so many locations. I enjoyed learning about strange animal species, and the programme opened my eyes to the hidden wonders of our planet.

小编点评:此段,考官旨在让自己的回答有血有肉,所以用了详略恰当的例子来说明了why you liked it. 结尾的表达简明有力,让人折服。高分词汇:stunning photography, global scope, opened my eyes, hidden wonders.

【回顾总结】

复杂句的使用可以说是这篇9分答案给我们的最大感受,相比较一些很容易搞不清楚用词语境的高分词汇而言,其实这些所谓的复杂句,对于烤鸭来说,是更靠谱的学习对象。像我们耳熟能详的which从句,because从句,稍微难点的it is that强调句,其实是完全有可能被我们用在口语答案中的。我们需要的只是对这些句式多一点了解,然后就是多尝试。

整体的连贯与完整,让人感觉到信服。即使用词简单,同样达到了有料且有力的效果。学会使用从句,从句子层面开始提升语言表达,可以说是雅思口语备考的正途。祝早日与雅思分手!

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