雅思写作满分范文范例——考官版小作文

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摘要：今天小站教育给大家带来的是雅思写作满分范文范例：考官版小作文，是考生最“害怕的”图表题。

今天小站教育雅思频道给各位考生带来的是来自英联邦考官的雅思小作文满分范例，题目是考生最恐惧的图表作文。大家来看看考官是如何构思及最后落笔的。

雅思写作满分范文范例

题目：The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

构思过程：

1. I know that I can write a short introduction by paraphrasing the question.

2. I look for an overall trend. I can see that the food/drinks/tobacco category has the highest percentages, and leisure/education has the lowest.

3. Now I want to write two main body paragraphs. I need to select something to say about each country. Remember, there is no rule about what information you select; everyone will do this differently.

4. I look for the highest figures in each category: I can see that Turkey has the highest figure for food/drinks/tobacco AND for education/leisure. Italy has the highest figure for clothing/footwear.

5. So, I'll write a paragraph about Turkey and Italy.

6. My final paragraph needs to talk about Ireland, Spain and Sweden.

7. Maybe I'll point out that Ireland has a high figure for the first category, Spain has the lowest figure for education/leisure, and Sweden has the lowest figures for the first AND second categories.

8. I don't need a conclusion because I have already mentioned a general trend in point 2.

考官范文：

The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.

It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.

雅思写作满分标准

1、内容(content)是否切题，立场(position)是否鲜明并得到有效阐释，结构(structure)是否有逻辑性。

2、文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间。

3、雅思写作取得高分的关键在于灵活地运用词汇，多使用非常用词汇，分数一般来说不会低于5.5分。因此，在日常学习中，如何区别低分词汇和高分词汇是关键所在。

4、句子结构的丰富性也是考官给分的一个亮点，好的段落应该由不同的句式组成，而不应该是千篇一律的句子结构。

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