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雅思小作文柱状图范文精读 房价变化篇

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摘要:本文帮大家带来雅思剑桥真题上面一篇关于房价变化的柱形图小作文,文中帮大家总结了写作思路和范文等,希望对大家的写作有所帮助。

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雅思小作文柱状图范文精读 房价变化篇图1

雅思作文题目:

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (剑7 test 3 task1)

雅思小作文柱状图范文精读 房价变化篇图2

范文:

The chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

According to the chart, during the period form 1990 to 1995 the average prices of houses in three cities decreased significantly by five percent in New York (USA) and about 7.5 percent in both Tokyo (Japan) and London(UK). While the average house prices increased slightly in two cities Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany) by about 1.5 percent and 2 percent respectively.

As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned, it is clear that the average house prices decreased only in Tokyo (Japan) by 5 percent. In contrast, the average house prices increased in the rest of cities. In New York, it increased considerably by 5 percent, in Madrid, it increased slightly by 4 percent, in Frankfurt, it increased by 2 percent.

London has the largest increase in the average house price over the 6 year period from 1996-2002 as it increased dramatically by 11 percent.

All in all, there are a wide differences in house prices between the five cities which illustrated in this chart. These differences may be a result of the number of population or the number of huses required in a certain city.

一、题目类型:

柱状图-1个

二、题目简要内容:

5个不同城市在两个不同时期(1990-1995年以及1996-2002年)平均房价的变化情况

三、素材积累:

上升:

rise、grow、go up、

improve、clime、boom、increase...

下降:

fall、drop、dip

go down、reduce、decrease....

副词:

considerably 显著地

significantly 显著地

dramatically 明显地

句式:

It is clear that.... .....明显的是...

in contrast..... 与之相反.....

四、论据积累:

描述图表作文时,考生要注意分析图中所示数据信息,在论述变化情况时要用相应的数据来支撑。在本柱状图中,数据的体现为百分比。

雅思小作文柱状图范文精读 房价变化篇图3

五、结构分析:

写作思路:

(1)在本图中,考生不仅要把各个项之间做对比,还要阐述某个项在不同时期的变化。也就是说同一个城市随时间的变化房价的上涨或是下降,以及同一个时间段内不同城市之间的房价存在什么差异。因此,在写的时候可以先写变化,然后再写比较。

(2)在第一个时间段内,五个城市的房价变化有增长和下降。我们在写的时候可以把增长的城市放在一起写,下降的城市放在一起写,并按照增长或下降的幅度高低来写。即先写法兰克福和马德里房价的上涨,后写东京,伦敦和纽约房价的下降。

在第二个时间段内,从图中可以看出只有东京的房价是下降的,其他四个城市的房价都是上涨的,所以可以先描述东京的房价变化再描述其他四个城市的房价变化,同样,也是按照增长的幅度来描述,依次为伦敦,纽约,马德里和法兰克福。

段落分析:

第一段:

改写题目,叙述核心思想。

The chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

然而在本范文中,第一段并没有很好的改写,与原题目区别不大。因此,为了表达的更好,我们可以改成,The bar chart displays the changes in the prices of average houses in five different cities(namely, New York, Madrid, Frankfurt, and London) in the period form 1990 to 2002.

第二段:

第二段描述的是在第一个时间阶段内五个城市的房价变化情况,先写下降趋势的再写上涨趋势的,并用具体数据说明。

According to the chart, during the period form 1990 to 1995 the average prices of houses in three cities decreased significantly by five percent in New York (USA) and about 7.5 percent in both Tokyo (Japan) and London(UK). While the average house prices increased slightly in two cities Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany) by about 1.5 percent and 2 percent respectively.

significantly 重要的,意义重大的

respectively adv. 分别地

第二句中是以while引导的从句,但是不能独立成句,应与上一句合并成一句,前面的句号改成逗号。如果想换一种方式的话可以把while改成however或是but,即可独立成句。

第三段:

第三段描述的是第二个时间段的城市的房价变化情况。即唯一一个下降变化的东京,然后再写其他四个上涨趋势的城市的房价变化。

As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned, it is clear that the average house prices decreased only in Tokyo (Japan) by 5 percent. In contrast, the average house prices increased in the rest of cities. In New York, it increased considerably by 5 percent, in Madrid, it increased slightly by 4 percent, in Frankfurt, it increased by 2 percent.

As far as .... is concerned就.....而言

it is clear that .....明显的是...

In contrast与之相反.....

in the rest of 剩余部分的....

considerably adv. 相当地;非常地

slightly adv. 些微地,轻微地

In New York, it increased considerably by 5 percent, in Madrid, it increased slightly by 4 percent, in Frankfurt, it increased by 2 percent.在此句中,三个主谓结构的短语并列,在后两个之间应该加上一个and来连接。

第四段:

第四段描述的是在第二个时间段内有显著变化的情况,即伦敦的房价变化。

London has the largest increase in the average house price over the 6 year period from 1996-2002 as it increased dramatically by 11 percent.

dramatically adv. 戏剧地;引人注目地

has应改为had,因为本图所描述的数据都是涉及到过去的,应该用一般过去时。

结尾段:

概括图中所示最主要的特点,即五个城市的房价变化存在明显差异。

All in all, there are a wide differences in house prices between the five cities which illustrated in this chart. These differences may be a result of the number of population or the number of houses required in a certain city.

All in all总而言之;头等重要的东西

a wide differences中的a要去掉

illustrated vi. 举例 vt. 阐明,举例说明;图解

which illustrated 应改为which are illustrated

然而,第二句话却说了在本图中无法直接得知的,属于多余的信息。

参考译文:

本图给出了与1989年相比,1990年到2002年12年间五个不同国家的五个不同城市平均房价在百分比方面的变化情况。

根据本图,在1990年至1995年期间,三个城市的平均房价有显著下降,美国纽约下降了15%,日本东京和英国伦敦都下降了约7.5%。而另外两个城市的平均房价略有上涨,西班牙马德里和德国法兰克福分别下降了约1.5%和2%。

就下一个阶段(1996年至2002年)而言,只有日本东京的平均房价明显下降了,为5%。与之相反,其他城市的平均房价都上升了。纽约房价显著上涨了5%,马德里略增了4%,法兰克福增加了2%。

伦敦在1996年至2002年的6年时间内平均房价增长幅度最大,大幅增长了11%。

总之,本图描述的五个城市的房价有着很大差异,这些差异可能是由城市的人口数量和所需要的房屋数量所导致的。

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