雅思大作文真题精解老师医生是否应该支边

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摘要：今天的雅思大作文精解，关于城乡发展。地域的发展不平衡带来了教育医疗的城乡巨大差别，这种现象无论是在国内，还是在贫穷如非洲，还是在富裕如美国，都无法避免。

编者按：今天的雅思大作文精解，关于城乡发展。地域的发展不平衡带来了教育医疗的城乡巨大差别，这种现象无论是在国内，还是在贫穷如非洲，还是在富裕如美国，都无法避免。请看这篇针对话题“老师医生是否应该支边”的范文。

【教育类】

In many countries, school and medical facilities are not available in the rural areas. To improve the situation, some people suggest that new teachers and doctors should be sent to rural areas for several years. Others disagree because every one has right to choose where to work. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 有人建议，新老师新医生应该被派到乡村地区服务若干年，有人认为他们有权利选择自己喜爱的工作，请讨论两种观点，给出你的意见?

【头脑风暴】

山路崎岖，却阻挡不了孩子们求学的渴望，也不该隔断身为教师或者医生的我们对乡村孩子们的牵挂。青山绿水，孕育的是淳朴民风，穷乡僻壤，磨练的是坚定意志。人生的经历是一笔财富，有些事，是不以金钱为导向的，若有可能，我们都应该圆一次乡村教师的梦，若有可能，我们都应该圆一次乡村医生的梦，为留守儿童、淳朴乡民尽绵薄之力，因为心中有爱，因为责任在肩。

【立场】我支持新老师、新医生去偏远地区做教育或者医疗志愿者，但是也要尊重他们的个人选择，同时，要给新医生新教师提供专业培训。

【思路拓展】

【支持老师和医生到乡下的支边】

①新老师、新医生在艰苦的工作环境和生活环境中得到了锻炼和成长，这些精神财富有助于他们未来事业的发展，毕竟，人生的经历是一笔财富，而且，这种经历体现了一个人的牺牲和奉献精神，自然赢得他人的尊重及带来职业成就感。

②对于乡村地区而言，这可提高偏远地域的教育水平，为医疗事业的发展注入了新鲜的活力。帮助更多的孩子改变命运，帮助更多的患者远离病痛。

【反对老师和医生到乡下的支边】

① 新老师尚无丰富的教学经验，新医生尚无丰富的临床经验，他们去乡下支边可能是误人子弟及造成医疗事故。

②不是所有的老师、医生都有服务乡村的意愿，强制的做法其实是剥夺了个人选择喜爱的工作的权利，会使得人产生挫败感、失去工作的动力。

【尾段总结】

政府应该鼓励新老师、新医生们支持边疆地区，同时，应该给予一些优惠的政策，给他们提供专业培训。

【范文赏析】

【首段】背景介绍 (争议焦点) 作家立场

Alarmingly, there exists a huge gap between thriving cities and rural areas in terms of the educational resources and medical treatment. Many rural people either fail to receive fine education or suffer from various diseases. When it comes to whether those university leavers, especially those major in education or medical treatment, should be encouraged to serve the poverty-stricken areas，I hold positive attitude.

【解析】

There exists a huge gap between thriving cities and rural areas in terms of the educational resources and medical treatment 在教育资源和医疗方面，城市和乡村存在巨大差距。

【二段】支持新老师新医生支持边疆

Virtually, to inspire new teachers or doctors to embark on voluntary works could benefit both parties in many respects. First, each life experience is a kind of fortune, the laborious working environment and living condition could greatly conduce to one’s character-training. More precisely, one could become more tenacious, independent and mature after experiencing the hardship. Also，efforts from volunteers could improve the health index and the overall quality of education in the remote rural areas. More children will shake off poverty and thus change the fates. More families will stay away from the agonies of illnesses.

【解析】

1. ……could benefit both parties in many respects v ……可使双方在很多方面受益

2. Each life experience is a kind of fortune. 每一种人生经历都是一笔财富。

3. Laborious working environment and living condition could greatly conduce to one’s character-training. 艰苦的工作环境以及生活条件可以极大地有助于一个人的性格培养。

【三段】反对新老师新医生支持边疆

Others，however，might take an opposite attitude towards this issue, some people argue that this practice does more harm than good. For one thing, instead of benefiting the countryside, new teachers or healthcare givers might trigger medical accidents or mislead those schoolchildren considering the inexperience and incompetence of those volunteers. For another, some young teachers and doctors will feel unmotivated and frustrated if they are sent to rural areas against their own will.

【解析】

1. This practice does more harm than good. 这种做法弊大于利

2. considering the inexperience and incompetence of those volunteers 考虑到志愿者们的经验和能力之不足

3. will feel unmotivated and frustrated v也许会感受到挫败，失去动力

【尾段】总结立场

In a nutshell, I encourage new teachers and doctors to serve the rural areas， however, more preferential policy, some alluring welfare and special training opportunities should be given to those volunteers.

【解析】

However, more preferential policy, some good welfares and specific training opportunities should be given to those volunteers. 然而，我们应该给予志愿者们优惠的政策，良好的福利和专业的培训。