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【雅思大作文真题精解】团队体育与团队精神

2015年12月01日09:14 来源:小站整理
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摘要:今天的雅思大作文精解,关于体育,关于教育。似乎中国的体育教育一直停留在“积极锻炼身体,增强人民体质”的阶段,殊不知体育里所蕴含的关于人生的各种命题:胜利,失败,不服输,坚持,友情,协作。

今天的雅思大作文精解,关于体育,关于教育。似乎中国的体育教育一直停留在“积极锻炼身体,增强人民体质”的阶段,殊不知体育里所蕴含的关于人生的各种命题:胜利,失败,不服输,坚持,友情,协作。

【雅思大作文真题精解】团队体育与团队精神图1

【教育类】

Some people think that the best way to teach children to learn to cooperate with others is through team sports at school,to what extent do you agree or disagree?有人认为:通过参加学校的体育运动,是使人学会合作的最佳方法,是否同意?

【雅思题库】

Some people argue that schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为:学校应该给孩子们提供便于就业的课程,其他课程,例如音乐课和体育课,不重要,是否同意这个观点。

【布局图】

首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

二段:让步原题观点的合理性

三段:反驳原题观点之不合理

尾段:再次亮明观点

写作类型:反对唯一性和最佳性

【立场】

鼓励孩子们从事竞技体育活动是培养他们合作精神和群体性经验的有效策略之一,但是,这不是最佳的、唯一的方式。

【范文赏析】

【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

Growth education is one of the key words of a person’s development. People have been debating, for many years, whether the best approach to enhance children’s cooperative consciousness is through encouraging them to embark on sports-related activities at school without reaching any definite consensus. To voice my opinion, inspiring students to dive into sports events is one of the effective strategies to help them cultivate cooperation spirit and group experience, yet, it is not the best and only way.

【解析】

1. Growth education is one of the key words of a person’s development 成长教育者个人的发展中至关重要。

2. embark on sports-related activities v从事和体育相关的活动

3. Inspiring students to dive into sports events is one of the effective strategies to help them cultivate cooperation spirit and group experience. 鼓励孩子们从事竞技体育活动是培养他们的合作精神和群体性经验的有效策略之一。

【二段】让步原题观点之合理性

Indeed, I have to concede that those who argue that sports activities can help young adults to nurture teamwork spirit and raise their awareness of cooperation are, to some extent, never without their reasons. Some people might argue that sports events can assist students in learning how to communicate and associate with people around them and thus improve their cooperation. To illustrate, in a basketball team, team member has to learn to tolerate and unite others, they must work together as a team and stick together as friends to win the victory. In this sense, campus activities can cultivate one’s cooperation spirit.

【解析】

1. nurture teamwork spirit and raise their awareness of cooperation 培养团队精神和合作意识

2. how to communicate and associate with people around them 学习如何与人交往交流

3. they must work together as a team and stick together as friends to win the victory. 他们必须团结一致,相交如友,才能取得胜利。

【雅思大作文真题精解】团队体育与团队精神图2

【三段】反驳其不合理性:

Nevertheless,as for how to develop one’s teamwork sprit, there are still a great many other options available. First, it works for students to partake of group learning. For example,I once participated in a study group,we have to make joint efforts to finish the professor’s assignments.Each team member has to learn how to coordinate and work with others. Sometimes, one has to sacrifice his or her advantage to help the team stand out. Also, efforts could be made by parents to send children to summer or winter holiday camping, which is also an ideal way to strengthen students’ group consciousness and interpersonal skills. Eventually, it is duty of every individual to learn to be big heart and put himself or herself in others’ shoes and thus people can live in harmony with other peers.

【解析】

1. It works for students to partake of group learning 学生们参加小组学习也是起作用的。

2. make joint efforts to finish make joint efforts to finish the professor’s assignments v共同努力完成老师的任务

3. coordinate and work with others v与他人协调与合作

4. has to sacrifice his or her advantage to help the team stand out 牺牲自我优势,以帮助团队胜出

5. to learn to be big heart and put himself or herself in others’ shoes 学会心胸豁达,换位思考

6. people can live in harmony with other peers v可以与其他同龄人和谐共处

【尾段】再次亮明观点+(总结理由)

In the final analysis, I would like to re-affirm my conviction that in addition to motivating students to participate in sports activities, there are still other ways available to make one become socially adequate and cooperative.

【解析】make one become socially adequate 使人在社交方面得心应手,善于合作。

以上就是小站雅思频道为大家分享的关于学校体育教育与团队协作精神培养关系的范文。原文载于新东方官方。祝早日雅思写作学有所成。祝早日与雅思分手。


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