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雅思考官范文开头深度解读——让考官惊艳的作文开头段

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摘要:好得开头可以帮助你的雅思写作拿到考官高的印象分。本文挑了3篇雅思考官写的开头段,请名师帮忙做讲解,分析考官的开头写的好在哪里,并且告诉大家怎样在雅思写作中写出好的开头,希望大家看完能有收获。

万事开头难,好的开头能让你的雅思写作如虎添翼.小站名师精选3篇雅思考官范文里好的开头段做详细分析,并告诉大家如何能在雅思写作考试中写出好的开头。大家看完之后,可以参照考官范文,参考小站老师的讲解方法写作文。希望大家轻轻松松备战雅思考试,取得好的成绩。话不多说,直接看正文。

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首先,来看一下三篇考官范文的开头段。

1)Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

开头段:Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

2)Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

开头段:When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.

3)There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

开头段:It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music.

不知道大家有没有发现,三个开头段都是两句话而且简洁明了,直接扣题,所以建议雅思考生们在备考雅思大作文的时候,开头段可以简短一点,控制在两句话左右,而非开头长篇大论,请注意考官的评分重点在主体段落。那又如何写呢?大家可以写以下两部分作为开头段:1)introduce the topic; 2) the general response。下面详细给大家分享一下如何去introduce the topic,拿到题目,很多同学在写引入话题时有种无处下手的感觉,这里笔者给大家分享三个非常实用的小技巧。

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描述客观事实

何谓客观事实,大家可以简单地理解为这个话题大的原因是什么,看一个题目,Some people say the government should pay for the health care and education, but others say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 那么这个题目大的原因可以写为:Many people cannot afford the cost of receiving an all-round education and medical expenses。

描述影响

这个技巧相对简单,读完题目,确定好题目中的对象词,进而描述影响就OK了,依然是上述题目,开头句又可以写为:Medical care and education have an important impact on our well-being.

改写题目

详细这一种方法是大家相对比较熟悉的,可以把题目中的某些核心词进行替换,也可以词性替换,也可以换不同的表达,所以上述题目还可以变为:It is argued that public money should be spent on medical care and the education system.

同样道理,再练习一个题目,School teachers used to be the source of information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because of the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

用第一种方法可以写为Technological advances enable people to acquire information in a variety of ways today.描述影响的方法又可以是Teachers play a vital role in education and have a profound impact on students' growth.改写题目可以变为Because of the use of computers and media technologies in different areas of education, the traditional role of teachers has been called into question.

以上就是跟大家分享的作文开头考官范文的全部内容,希望大家看完能有收获~

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