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A golf course and park is located in the west of this city, with a river to the south, crossingBranfield from the south-western corner to the north. To the east of the golf course and park isa railway, linking he north-western corner and the south-eastern corner of this city. Situated inthe north of Brandfield, a housing estate covers an area between the river and the railway.There is a city center in the middle of this city,located to the south of the railway and divided bythe river.It is noticeable that a road is sited between the golf course and park in the west andthe city center in the middle,and it goes across the south-eastern corner of the housingestate,connecting the north-eastern corner of this city to the south of the city center and to thesouth of this city. S1 is located to the north of the city center and the railway, between the roadand the river.
这个学生的作文主要问题是她上来不断地描述，而忘记了这个图的首要事情是描述S1 和S2. 这个学生的问题体现了中文和英文的思维差异。也是我们中国人在写PS，大学作业，EMAIL，工作报告，甚至口语交流中的一个普遍问题。
The hosuing estate located in the northern corner of this area with a huge golf course andpark to the southwest. Situated in the middle of this area, the City centre is surrounded by twomain roads and a railway from northwest to south while a river cross the centre from north tosouthwest. There is an industrial Estate on the southeastern corner of this area.
It should be noted that the S1 of the shopping mall is to the north of the city center andsurrounded by the river, railway and the northern road. In contrast, the S2 located in thesouth of this city and to the left of the railway and the Industrial Estate.
譬如说s1:1 靠近housing areas，那里的人可以坐火车去 2 CITY centre 的人可以坐火车或者开车去， 3 靠近河 ，可能景色不错
S2：1 靠近CITY centre ， 人们可以开车或者坐火车去，但是housing areas太远了 2 靠近工业区，有可能有污染和噪音
S1 is possibly located in the north of Brandfield, lying next to one railway line and one road.This means that this supermarket can be assessed by those living in the residential block tothe north and also by the shoppers from the city centre. Another advantage of this site is itsproximity to the river that runs from north to south. People may enjoy a good view of the riverwhen shopping.
Similar to S1, S2 is supported by the town’s transport infrastructure, in view of the factthat it is sited between the rainway and the road. The difference is that consumers from thehousing area may have to travel a longer distance before reaching this site in the south-northcorner. This suggested site is also close to the industrial estate on the eastern edge of the townand pollution is possibly a cause for concern.
S1 is possibly located in the north of Brandfield, lying next to one railway line and one road.There is a housing area to the south and residents can travel by car or train to visit S1. This siteis also accessible for those working or living in the city centre. A river runs across the town tothe east of S1.
S2 is in the south-east of the town and close to the railway and the road. Although shoppersfrom the city centre can reach this site easily, the journey is long for those from the housingestate. To the east of S2 is the industrial zone.