【雅思开讲啦】手把手7步走教你在雅思小作文中写出完美长句

2016年03月09日15:11 来源：小站教育作者：Phoebe: 参与（8）阅读（8547）

摘要：如何在雅思写作中写出漂亮的长句一直是广大考生关心的问题，本文小站的Phoebe老师就通过7个步骤，详细为大家讲解如何将一个只有主谓结构的简单句变成一个漂亮的复杂句，相信一定会对正在备考雅思写作的同学们有所帮助，详情见文章。

同学们大家好，接下来这节课小站的Phoebe老师教大家如何在雅思写作的图表作文中写出长句子。一共分为7个步骤，详情如下：

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一、大家先写出一个简单句，只有主谓结构，即Basic Fact ( subject + verb )

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.

二、添加数词Numbers

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.

三、什么时间?When?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

四、数字是准确的吗?Exactly this number?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

五、添加一个副词Add an adverb

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

六、以名词结构复述Rephrase with a noun

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

现在我们有了一个33个单词的漂亮的长句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS, GOOD LONG SENTENCE~

七、现在我们尝试以名词开头来重写这个句子。Can we begin with a noun?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

改写成：

There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

现在已经37个单词啦！37 words now！我不建议写得更长了，it’s a nice long sentence~

总结：

写长句子时常用的7个步骤Here are the 7 steps we used：

1. Basic Fact

2. Number

3. When?

4. Exactly this number?

5. Add an adverb

6. Rephrase with a noun

7. Can we begin with a noun?

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