灵活使用3要素 带你突破雅思写作结尾段
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雅思大作文结尾是雅思大作文写作中非常重要的部分，理由是不言而喻的，所以很多烤鸭才会在此处进入误区，很多人的作文，在结尾段里浓墨重彩地大写特写，完全忘记了结尾段在全文里的定位什么。结尾段的核心使命是重申全文的观点，形成对前文的呼应。仅次而已。
首先我们看看结尾的基本三要素：
1.Use a concluding phrase 表总结的短语
2.Restate the thesis statement in different words 转述全文的观点
3.Give some personal opinions, hopes, fears, or recommendations about the future 对于未来表达想法，期待等
Question:
Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Sample IELTS essay introduction:
Despite the fact that killing animals for sport is popular in modern society, it remains a contentious issue. (thesis) I believe that blood sports are cruel and uncivilized and so should be banned as soon as possible.
Conclusion：
总结前文观点。
To conclude, it is clear that blood sports must be prohibited as no civilized society should allow the pain and suffering of animals simply for fun.
表达自己的观点，对未来进行预测。
I hope that governments around the world discuss this issue with haste and forbid this inhumane type of sport as soon as possible.
完整的结尾如下：
To conclude, it is clear that blood sports must be prohibited as no civilized society should allow the pain and suffering of animals simply for fun. I hope that governments around the world discuss this issue with haste and forbid this inhumane type of sport as soon as possible.
是不是so easy哇。表总结的短语+重申的全文观点+对未来的预测/期待/担忧。
相关举例：
例一：
Question:
Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Introduction:
Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world. I am unconvinced that it is dangerous, and feel that both alternative and conventional medicine can be useful.
Conclusion:
To sum up, I strongly believe that conventional medicine and alternative therapies can and should coexist. They have different strengths, and can both be used effectively to target particular medical problems. The best situation would be for alternative therapies to be used to support and complement conventional medicine.
例二：
Question:
Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction:
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to university. While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects, others think that society and the individual benefit in much broader ways.
Conclusion:
All in all, I believe that although a main aim of university education is to get the best job, there are clearly further benefits. If we continue to promote and encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better future for individuals and society.
例三：
Question:
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Introduction:
Probably the most worrying threat to our planet at the present time is global warming.This essay will examine the reasons why global warming is occurring and discuss some possible solutions.
Conclusion:
To conclude, although global warming is a serious issue, there are steps that governments and individuals can take to reduce its effects. If we are to save our planet, it is important that this is treated as a priority for all concerned.
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