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4月16日雅思考试大作文7分范文--public parks or shopping centers

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摘要:4月16日雅思大作文话题关于城市规划,解题关键是认识到,在城外建购物中心,不会影响到人们的正常生活,而如果城里有太多购物中心,会影响到生活的方方面面。这里提供一篇7分范文,供大家参考。

4月16日雅思写作大作文考了一道非常古老的题目。问题的核心是:在城里,到底该多规划建设公园或者运动场,还是多建设购物中心?很显然,两者都有利有弊。公园或运动场方便大家休闲,运动,从而有利于身体健康,同时有利于城市的安静和安全;购物中心则方便大家购物和闲逛,但会让城市显得非常拥挤。因为现在很多家庭都有汽车,因此最好将购物中心建在城市之外,城里则应该建更多公园或运动场。一起看正文!

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Task:

When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer:

When a new town is planned, there is always a problem to solve: whether they should build more public parks or sports facilities or more shopping centers? Although more shopping malls may provide conveniences to those shoppers, I believe building more public facilities is a far better choice.

More public facilities help people to live a more satisfying life. With a public park nearby, even the laziest person will go outdoors and breathe the fresh air there. People can take a walk in the park together with their family members, chatting and having a lot of fun. This is of course much beneficial to their health than staying at home, sitting in front of a TV and a computer like a sofa potato. At the same time, when people are enjoying their time in the park or the sports field, the town or city will become a lot more peace and quiet.

However, if there are more shopping centres than parks in the town or city, it will become much more crowded, noisy and dirty. When the street is lined with all kinds of stores, there will be numerous vehicles coming and going, and when shoppers rush into these stores, they will make noise intolerable to the city dwellers. As so many people crowd into a limited space like a shopping centre, the safety problem may also arise. Some people may argue that, despite all these problems, more shopping centres will benefit people by saving their shopping time. This argument does not hold much water, however. On the one hand, having to push your way through throngs of people when shopping does not really save your time; on the other hand, as more and more families have cars, it does not really cost more time if they drive to the shopping centres built in the wider space outside of the town or city.

To conclude, I prefer to have more public facilities to shopping centres in a new town. A town with more public facilities is more peaceful, quiet and safer while a town with more shopping centres is noisy, crowded and therefore less desirable. My suggestion is that shopping centres be built in the surburb of the town/city where more spaces are available.

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