2016年6月18日雅思考试写作大作文范文--行为教育

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摘要：6月18日雅思大作文考得依然是一篇关于教育类话题的作文：It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?来看一篇范文！

Task：It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

除了提供正规教育外，学校的责任是教导良好的行为，你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

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Sample answer：

The matter that weather or not schools should enhance behavioral education besides traditional academic teaching is of great concern to the public.Behavioral education is essential for schools to add in their traditional academic teaching programs.

Good behavior is more important for students in their daily life than their academic level.First of all,students are benefit for good study behavior all life long.Many students do things as teachers or parents tell them to do instead of doing things as their own plans.This problem can be solved if schools put more efforts on encouraging students build up good self-study behavior.Futhermore,schools and parents should pay attention on students' manners.Manners are definitely good and essential behavior for student's daily life and their socializing affairs.Nobody would like to cooperate with people who have bad manners.Therefore,schools should make more efforts on how to enhance the academic and behavior teaching at the same time.

Only focusing on academic teaching many lead to student lack of public awareness.Without good behavior teaching,students do not know what behaviors are suitable for kinds of real situation.Take working socializing,as an example,bad communication and wrong behaviors in teamwork would lead to a serious result because people would refuse to cooperate with others who treat them rudely.Good behavior also includes awareness.Nobody would teach young people that do not protect environment and do things bad for others.Schools play an important role in youth education,so,schools must pay attention on if their traditional teaching is lack of behavior guiding.

All in all,behavior teaching is more important than academic teaching in my mind.I call for schools to add good behavior education in their current teaching programs that is good for student's life in long terms.

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