2016年7月9日最新雅思写作大作文多版本范文汇总
- 2016年07月11日15:23 来源：小站教育
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7月9日雅思大作文考察的是讨论观点题型：In some countries, advertisers increase the amount of advertising which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys，and other goods. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.在一些国家，广告商增加广告的数量，试图说服孩子们买零食、玩具和其他商品。父母反对给孩子施加这样的压力。但一些广告主声称，这些广告中有有用的信息。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。
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小站教育版
核心观点句：
In conclusion, the vices overwhelm the virtues brought by these children-targeted advertisements. Even the adults can barely discern truth from deceptions and exaggerations, let alone the inexperienced who will also suffer from unnecessary peer pressure and wrong associations.
1.熊猫版（265 words）
核心观点句：
From my own perspective, introducing some toys is necessary for children because children also need some recreation, but governments should better regulate the content of advertisements for children.
从我个人的角度来看，介绍一些玩具是必要的，因为孩子们也需要一些娱乐，但政府应该更好地规范儿童广告的内容。
2.新东方版（287 words）
核心观点句：
Personally, advertisements themselves contain a lot of information which can be quite useful for consumers.
就个人而言，广告本身包含了大量的信息，这些信息对消费者来说是非常有用的。
3.雅思哥版
核心观点句：
Overall, I believe that advertising marketed towards children should be strictly examined and controlled by the related authorities because children are the disadvantaged group of people and prone to any tricks and deceits. Also parents should be more discreet when choosing a product from advertisements.
总的来说，我认为相关部门应严格审查和控制广告对儿童销售,因为孩子是容易被欺骗的弱势群体。并且父母根据广告选择产品时应更加谨慎。
4.微博周华章版
核心观点句：
To conclude, I think that children are too young to be aware of the persuasive intent and should be seen as victims of advertising, not consumers.
最后，我认为，孩子们太小了对有说服力的意图没有意识，应该被视为广告的受害者，而不是消费者。
5.唐老雅版(360 words)
核心观点句：
Therefore, I hold the strong opinion that children advertising be banned.
因此，我认为孩子们的广告应该被禁止。
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