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【小站出品】2016年9月15日雅思考试大作文范文

2016年09月19日14:49 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:9月15日雅思写作考试真题大作文,考察的为环境类话题,要求考生讨论私家车的数量增多给环境带来的是好处是否大于坏处,来看小站老师的范文。

Task:More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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Advantages for individuals are more the disadvantages for environment.

让步,cars can have environment impact. But it is not the main reason, even the animal husbandry especially the dairy industries even make more greenhouse gases than car industry

提出自己的观点:Advantages for individuals are more.

1st cars bring more convenience to life, flexible to choose going-out schedule, not depending on public transportation.

2nd cars bring more enjoyment in life, travel with cars without concerning the poor public transportation to some worth visiting places.

3rd cars allowed us to take more care of the junior families, who cant take public buses with poor health conditions.

参考范文:

With the development of economy and technology, private cars are affordable to more families. So the debate of the cars contribution to individuals and the disadvantages of cars to environment is also presented.

I believe the benefits the cars brought to us is more than the harm they make to the environment. Although we can’t deny that cars actually indeed made some air pollutions (due to the greenhouse emission) and maybe also some noise pollution. We can’t ignore the value of the cars in our daily life. The reasons are listed below.

First of all, with private cars, people enjoy more flexible going –out schedule, we don’t need to passively rely on the public transportation. For example, we can determine the time to set out to work every morning without concerning the public bus time.

Additionally, cars also bring us more enjoyment and flexibility to our life. We can plan a longer distanced car trip with private cars since many worth visiting places have poor public transportation access.

Last but not least, cars assists us to take more care of our families. When you have children or elderly people, concerning the safety and comfort issue, it is better to drive them by private cars since the public buses are always crowed and chaotic. The further example is when our family members have emergencies to hospital, we don’t need to wait the taxi or the ambulance, and we can drive them to hospital immediately for in time treatment.

All in all, having private cars is very important to individuals in terms of the conveniences, enjoyments and flexibility the cars brought to us. Compare to those benefits, I think the environment issue the cars made can be neglected.

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