修改雅思作文 你得完成这几步
- 2016年11月08日17:48 来源：互联网
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雅思写作的大作文需要我们用40分钟的时间写一篇250字的文章，我们可以花6-8分钟的时间来构思文章观点以及结构，28-30分钟时间来写文章，最后一定要留出3-6分钟的时间来进行检查。那么相信考生会有一个问题：我应该从哪几个方面来进行检查呢?考试的时间是很宝贵的，所以如果不经过一定的训练，只在考试中的最后几分钟来检查自己的文章，考生肯定无从下手。所以我建议广大考生在平时的训练中，就要做好检查以及修改这一项工作。具体可以从如下几方面入手：
1.标点和拼写是否有错误
2.是否使用了正确的语法结构，比方说，考生经常犯错误的几个方面：动词时态是否一致、主谓是否一致、词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误;
3.句式是否有变化(如各种从句的使用、分词结构等);
4.是否明确的观点以及分论点;
5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想，所有扩展句都紧扣主题;
6.使用了过渡性词语，因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性;
7.文章是否提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。
考生在平时的训练中，可以只侧重写文章，但是对检查以及修改这个过程没有重视。殊不知，如果检查以及修改这项工作做得好，会比单单写文章更加有效果。大家甚至可以把修改过的文章再拿过来修改一次，总结自己的错误，加深印象。
范例：
对于自己复习的烤鸭，最难得莫过于写了作文不知道对不对。。没人帮忙修改，也看不出自己哪里犯了错，哪里需要改进~下面是一名外籍雅思老师为烤鸭们总结的checklist，照着这个，你可以对自己练习写的小作文进行修改，learn from your own mistake是最好的提高方法!
A checklist for part 1 graphs, charts and tables
In task 1 it is important that you accurately describe the information from the diagram so you don’t lose marks under Task Response. The difficulty is to decide what is the key information as there is often a lot of data to process. One way of thinking about this, is to ask yourself if someone could draw the chart and graph from the information in your report. This is not easy to do and so to help you, you will find below a 8 point checklist, an exercise and a practice suggestion.
Checklist
Here is my 8 point checklist to help you include the relevant details. I suggest you use it to check your own work: you should be able to answer “yes”to all the questions.
1. Type of diagram 图表类型
Have you correctly identified whether it is a bar chart/line graph/pie chart/flow chart/table?
有没有说清楚这个一个什么样的图表----柱状图?线图?饼图?还是流程图?
2. The correct tense 时态
Have you correctly identified whether the data in the chart relates to past time, a current state of affairs or a future prediction? This includes not just using the correct tenses but also including specific times in your report.
有没有运用正确的时态呢?要记住，不止要用对时态，还要再小作文中写清具体的时间!
3. The subjects 对象
Have you included all the subjects that are referred to in the diagram? Even if you have a bar chart ortable naming 8 different countries for example, you still need to refer to them all in your report.
所有图表中所提到的对象都写进小作文了吗?如果图表里提到8个国家，全部都要写进去哦~
4. Units
Have you included references to the units? These may be units of time (months/years etc), money (millions of £) or simple numbers (10,000s). To do this, you need to read the x and y axes carefully.
单位写清楚了吗?X轴和Y轴上的单位都要看清楚哦~
5. Highs and lows/Beginnings and ends/Biggest and smallest
Have you included the extremes shown in the diagram? In nearly all charts and graphs these are key features to include as they give the reader a frame for understanding the chart or graph. When there is a lot of data, you may not include every extreme so you need to use your judgement.
文中有重要信息点了吗?最高点、最低点、起点、终点、最多的、最少的一定要写进去!
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