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雅思写作真题范文社会类话题--外出不安全

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Task:Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?

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Sample answer:

Security is always a frequently talked topic in the modern society. Looking into the factors leading to dangers helps people to protect themselves from insecurity. This essay will mainly analyze the reasons for this problem and provide some solutions.

There are two main factors contributing to the phenomenon that more people feel insecure. In general, the detailed description of violence on the mass media should be responsible for this problem. When criminal cases such as shooting, theft and driving after drinking are often reported on the TV, the viewers’ safety and security will probably be threatened and they will be in the belief that they are likely to subject to offenses at anytime. This problem can also be attributed to the widespread use of mobile devices. With more applications installed in people’s smart phones, they save too many secrets on this device--the online bank passwords and the information of their social network which may include significant business opportunities. It is not exaggerated that their lives and property will be threatened if they lose their precious mobile devices.

To solve this problem, governments, police stations and citizens themselves should cooperate with each other. First of all, the government should impose a restriction on the representation of crimes, reducing the plots focusing on the detailed description. The governments and police stations needs to set up a security system, through which citizens’ personal information can be prevented from being stolen. It is also of great essence that citizens should raise the awareness of security.

As mentioned above, the occurrence of crime on the mass media and the storage of personal information on mobile devices are the main reasons for insecurity. Governments, police stations and citizens should make a concerted effort to address this issue.

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