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Nowadays, many people do not feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem. 现在，很多在无论在家里还是出门在外都感到不安全，原因何在，如何解决?
In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 在一些国家，年轻人更加富有，安全，健康，但是，他们还是不快乐，原因何在，如何解决?
首段:背景介绍 + 问题影响 (对于个人，家庭，社会) + 写作目的(表达分析问题和解决问题)
尾段: 亮明观点 + 总结理由
首段:背景介绍 + 问题影响 + 写作目的
Alarmingly，a number of modern people lack the sense of security due to various reasons, which really exerts an adverse impact on one’s happiness index and the harmony of the society. This essay aims to examine the reasons why some people suffer from the declined sense of safety and then present relevant recommendations.
解析: really exerts an adverse impact on …… 施加不良的影响
二段:三个原因的展开:社会原因 + 家庭原因 + 个人原因
The potential reasons of people’s decreased security index are manifold. First, it might be owed to the increased rate of criminalities. Specifically, some anti-social offences have not be effectivelycontrolled. For example, some females might encounter infringement of assault. Secondly, thepsychological insecurity among many modern people is the result of fierce competition and potential risk of unemployment. Currently, with the ever-accelerated development of high-tech and constant update of knowledge, work today is more challenging than it used to be. Therefore, the pressure ofmaintaining a stable career deprives many people’s sense of security. Last, the differences inpersonality account for why some people always have idle fears. Some young adults, in nature, usually tend to worry about illness, unemployment, bankruptcy. Imaginably, as for those people, their safety index is comparatively speaking low.
解析:encounter infringement of assault v 遭遇到侵犯和攻击
解析:deprives many people’s sense of security v剥夺了一些人的安全感
解析:some people always have idle fears 一些人总是杞人忧天
解析:safety index is comparatively speaking low. 安全指数相对较低
三段:问题解决的策略:政府如何作为 + 企业如何作为 + 个人如何作为;
In order to enhance modern people’s sense of security，several methods should be adopted. First, the government should be urged to enact relevant legislations to severely punish those habitual law-breakers. At the same time, every individual need to raise their awareness of self-protection awareness. Also, efforts should be made by relevant enterprises to provide their employees more economicincentive and mental consolation. To render company stocks, retirement pension plans to their workerscan serve as perfect example. Lastly, it is the unshakable obligation of every individual, especially those anxious person, to adjust their mentalities, to live at the moment and to enjoy current life.
解析:the government should be urged to enact relevant legislations to severely punish 政府应该制定立法严厉处罚……
解析:economic incentive and mental consolation. 经济鼓励和精神安慰
解析:it is the unshakable obligation of every individual to do sth 做……是人人有责
In closing, it is no easy task to maintain a peaceful and delighted state of mind. Every method I recommended has its unique merits, therefore, joint efforts should be made by the government, thecorporations and every one of us.