3月18日雅思真题大作文范文:教育类
- 2017年03月20日13:54 来源:小站整理
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Task:Children can learn from TV effectively. So children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
像这种题目,就比较适合同学们拿来练手,想观点的难度不大,用到的词汇也是比较常见的一些词汇~
正文部分:
第一段:同义改写,表明观点
When it comes to the issue about whether watching TV should be recommended for children, some people argue that parents should encourage their children to watch TV programs every day both at school and after school since they could acquire more knowledge. However, I cannot agree with this opinion.
第二段:小孩可能并没有真的去记住知识,而就是图个乐子~
To begin with, TV programs may distract children’s attention from study, which accounts for the reason why children should not spend too long time on TV programs. For most children, courses at school seem more boring while TV programs could be more interesting because there are funny plots, interesting characters and sound effects in TV programs. Then, children may be capable of focusing on their classes and cannot fully understand what teachers teach. In order prevent children from collapsing in front of a screen every day, children should be restricted for watching TV programs.
第三段:电视节目可能会有一些不合适的内容啊!
Furthermore, there may exist some inappropriate contents inside some programs exerting a negative influence on children. With the classification and rating administration in movies, children could avoid seeing many scenes concerning about drugs and violence. However, no one can fully guarantee that children can be absolutely away from those inappropriate programs on TV. Since children cannot distinguish right from wrong, they may imitate some bad behaviors, such as bullying others.
第四段:我这里写了个驳论,把“能拓宽视野”这个点驳斥了一下,认为小孩能记住学校的知识就不容易,拔苗助长不一定有效果~
Admittedly, some opponents argue that watching TV enables children to broaden their horizons so they should see TV programs regularly; however, they are overoptimistic about this merit. It is true that some scientific and educational programs can help children acquire some knowledge in advance, but how much knowledge children can absorb remains a question. Unlike adults, children may find it too difficult to remember too much information at a time. For most children, it is enough for them to understand knowledge they learn at school and it may even become an extra burden on students if they are forced to watch more TV programs.
最后一段:小小总结自己的观点和理由就好~
In sum, spending time on TV programs at school and at home may not be an optimal choice for children, considering that they may lose interests in study and simulate some bad behaviors.