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2017年5月13日雅思G类写作考试真题范文:儿童肥胖问题

2017年05月16日18:01 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:为大家第一时间带来5月13日G类雅思写作考试真题范文。本次大作文考的是社会类话题,two-part question题型,探讨小孩肥胖的问题。请看小站版范文,由小站小站黄天枝老师

Nowadays more and more kids are getting fatter and being less fit in some countries. What do you think are the causes? How to solve the problem?小孩肥胖愈来愈多,身体愈来愈不好,原因与对策?

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结构分析:

这是一篇report,一般而言,report会给出一个现象,要求考生分析现象的原因、影响或者解决方案(两两结合)。结构简单,按顺序回答题目问题即可(一个问题回答一段或者两段,但是文章总共不能超过5段),需要注意的是:

1 首段最后一句话要有过渡句来告诉考官这篇作文要写什么内容(类似于议论文的表明观点)

2 每段开头要有中心句总结本段内容(时刻记得结论先行)

3 需要特别注意的是,这种原因+解决方案的组合方式,原因和解决方案应该是一一对应的

4 report也一定要有总结段,不要把solution和总结段合在一起写

内容分析:

健康问题是如今很热门的考点之一,常见的健康问题原因包括:长期依赖科技、工作/学习繁忙导致缺乏运动,快餐的盛行导致热量摄入过多,环境恶化、商家品质不过关、政府质检不过关导致食品不安全等等。那么相对应的提出解决方案,政府(立法,税负)、媒体(公益广告/教育性节目的宣传)、学校(义务教育,课外活动)、社区(宣传栏,组织活动)、个人(配合政策,自主解决问题)都可以做一份贡献。

Obesity has become one of the biggest challenges for people in the 21st century and it has posed a great threat to children’s health condition. Therefore,the factors responsible for this problem will be discussed in this report and then the feasible solutions will be given accordingly.

The prevalence of fast food and the lack of exercise should be blamed for this worrying trend. The quick meal has long been accused of being high in fat,salt and calories and it is always served in large portions. However,these hamburgers,fried chickens and pizzas are warmly welcome among children,leading to the fact that the number of obese minors have significantly increased. Besides,the excessive reliance on technology and the heavy academic burden give rise to the neglect of workout. Children are commonly seen seating in the classroom and cars instead of running on the playground or treadmill.

The responsibility of solving the problem mentioned above falls on government and schools. The former,with its administrative power entrusted by citizens,can make laws to constrain the spread of fast food. To be more specific,imposing heavy tax on fast food industry is a good way worth trying. As for the latter,it directly cultivates and affects children’s way of life,including eating habits. That is to say,schools have the compelling obligation to lead their students to eat healthily through compulsory lessons,extracurricular activities or some warm-up or quiz before class.

In conclusion,the fatness of children is mainly attributed to two reasons. To settle this problem,the policymakers should limit the proliferation of fast food industry and schools are supposed to highlight the importance of wholesome eating habits.

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