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考官雅思写作小作文满分范文 柱状图:交通事故

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摘要:为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔,用最正统的4段式写作,本文主题-柱状图:交通事故,共165词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们,可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文,网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少,质量上乘的就更少,而天下烤鸭,苦小作文久矣,迫切需要图表类范文的指导,所以,请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。柱状图:交通事故,共165词,band9.

话题:

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

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满分范文:

The bar chart compares the number of incidents and injuries for every 100 million passenger miles travelled on five different types of public transport in 2002.

It is clear that the most incidents and injuries took place on demand-response vehicles. By contrast, commuter rail services recorded by far the lowest figures.

A total of 225 incidents and 173 injuries, per 100 million passenger miles travelled, took place on demand-response transport services. These figures were nearly three times as high as those for the second highest category, bus services. There were 76 incidents and 66 people were injured on buses.

Rail services experienced fewer problems. The number of incidents on light rail trains equalled the figure recorded for buses, but there were significantly fewer injuries, at only 39. Heavy rail services saw lower numbers of such events than light rail services, but commuter rail passengers were even less likely to experience problems. In fact, only 20 incidents and 17 injuries occurred on commuter trains.(165 words, band 9)

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