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考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 地图:学校变迁

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摘要:为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔,用最正统的4段式写作,本文主题-地图:学校变迁,共183词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们,可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文,网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少,质量上乘的就更少,而天下烤鸭,苦小作文久矣,迫切需要图表类范文的指导,所以,请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。最难题型之一地图:学校变迁,共183词,band 9。考官的四段套路:introduction+review+2 details。

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The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.(Source: Official IELTS Practice Materials 2)

考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 地图:学校变迁图1

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The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024.

It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students.

In 2004, there were 600 pupils attending the school, and the two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed. Furthermore, the plan is to join the two original buildings together, creating a shorter path that links the buildings only.

As the third building and a second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field, a new, smaller sports field will need to be laid. A new road will also be built from the main entrance to the second car park. Finally, no changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park.

(183 words, band 9)

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