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考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 线图:手机变迁

2017年06月19日15:06 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔,用最正统的4段式写作,本文主题-线图:手机变迁,共162词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们,可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文,网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少,质量上乘的就更少,而天下烤鸭,苦小作文久矣,迫切需要图表类范文的指导,所以,请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。线图:手机变迁,共162词,band 9。考官的四段套路:introduction+review+2 details。

考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 线图:手机变迁图1

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The line graph shows the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

范文

The line graph compares average yearly spending by Americans on mobile and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010.

It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the 10-year period, while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly. The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile services overtook that for residential phone services.

In 2001, US consumers spent an average of nearly $700 on residential phone services, compared to only around $200 on cell phone services. Over the following five years, average yearly spending on landlines dropped by nearly $200. By contrast, expenditure on mobiles rose by approximately $300.

In the year 2006, the average American paid out the same amount of money on both types of phone service, spending just over $500 on each. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones had reached around $750, while the figure for spending on residential services had fallen to just over half this amount.(162 words, band 9)

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