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考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 线图:老龄人口

2017年06月19日15:10 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔,用最正统的4段式写作,本文主题-线图:老龄人口,共162词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们,可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文,网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少,质量上乘的就更少,而天下烤鸭,苦小作文久矣,迫切需要图表类范文的指导,所以,请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。线图:老龄人口,共178词,band 9。考官的四段套路:introduction+review+2 details。

考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 线图:老龄人口图1

汇总传送门:41篇考官亲笔a类雅思小作文集结 9分盛宴

话题

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

范文

The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.

It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.

In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.

Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)

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