网站导航     在线客服  
全部
雅思写作观点语料库
   首页    雅思   冲刺宝典   雅思写作   正文
学生选择在小站备考:30天 298083名,今日申请8人    备考咨询 >>

考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 混合图:运动开支

2017年06月19日15:51 来源:小站整理
参与(3) 阅读(1795)
摘要:为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔,用最正统的4段式写作,本文主题-混合图:运动开支,共185词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们,可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文,网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少,质量上乘的就更少,而天下烤鸭,苦小作文久矣,迫切需要图表类范文的指导,所以,请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。线图:运动开支,共185词,band 9。考官的四段套路:introduction+review+2 details。

考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 混合图:运动开支图1

汇总传送门:41篇考官亲笔a类雅思小作文集结 9分盛宴

话题

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

范文

The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.

It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and swimming.

In 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over £30.

Looking at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.(185 words, band 9)

大家都在学

看完这篇文章有何感觉?已经有3人表态,100%的人喜欢

相关文章

雅思考官Simon写作大小作文9分范文合集(全部100+篇... 2016雅思考试机经与真题 【考官范文】Simon老师9分雅思范文 带你考高分带你飞 2017年雅思考试真题大作文多版本范文汇总(持续更新) 考官制造 a类雅思写作小作文7大题型满分范文汇总 雅思8分大神备考高分冲刺推荐课程 【小作文题库】雅思写作小作文饼状图范文汇总 雅思大作文预测范文题库
【小站雅思官网】IELTS雅思考试为您提供最新雅思备考资料,雅思机经预测,雅思听力、口语、阅读、写作、词汇真题下载,更有雅思报名、雅思培训等特色服务。