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雅思写作范文分析—假日旅游类

2017年07月03日11:50 来源:小站整理
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摘要:虽然关于度假的问题在雅思写作考试中的出现频率并不是特别高,关于旅游和节假日安排的话题还是不断地在雅思写作中出现。这道关于不同行业的工作人员的节假日安排的作文题,让很多考生感到“无话可说”。请留意此范文中的观点及其对应的论据。

这道题目要求烤鸭就“从事不同职业的人是否应该在不同的时间休假”发表自己的看法,是典型的观点类雅思作文题目。范文的写作与最传统的观点类议论文写作方法有细微的不同。该范文氛围四段:第一段开门见山地给出作者观点,即应该是灵活安排假期;第二,三段列举不同方面的论据,有力地支持了作者的观点;末尾段再重申作者的观点的同时,还给出了自己的建议。

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题目从事不同职业的人是否应该在不同的时间休假?请给出你的看法。

Should people doing different jobs have holidays at different time of the year? What is your opinion?

More and more people choose to avoid the holiday seasons to go traveling because tourist sites are invariably(不变地,adv) overcrowded(过渡拥挤, vt) during public holidays. To enjoy yourselves you need to take a vacation when most people are working. Apart from public holidays, employees should be allowed an annual holiday at the time they choose.

The idea of people in different professions having holidays at different time is often out of necessity. Places such as hospitals, fire departments and even restaurants should be in operation all year long. Thus, their employees must partake in some kind of rotating vacation system, whereby each of them takes some days off by turn and on an irregular basis. Besides, some jobs are only seasonal. Teachers, for example, enjoy summer and winter holidays. In many lines of business, there is a peak seasonand a trough season. It is only reasonable to allow workers to take some days off when the business is slack.(冷清的,adj)

In addition, this kind of liberal(不拘泥的,adj) attitude toward holidays can reduce the strains(紧张, n) on public facilities during the holiday season. As things stand now, it is a nightmare to travel during public holidays, for there will be throngs of people everywhere. It is hard to get tickets, book rooms or even to find decent eateries. The infrastructure is not adequate enough to cope with the influx(流入,n) of tourists swarming(涌往, v)to certain numbers of scenic spots. With separate holidays becoming the norm, people can better enjoy their vacations.

The ideal way would be for the employees todecide the time and duration of the holidays, provided that it doesn’tinterfere(干涉,vi) with the running of the business. People themselves know when they would most enjoy a vacation. It is ultimately a personal matter and should be left to our own discretion(判断力, n) if possible.

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