雅思写作高分范文学习技巧:跟着考官学逻辑
- 2017年07月05日10:19 来源：小站整理
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许多电影都描写过，大考过后考生们无比喜悦和轻松的场景。比如撕考卷、折断笔、甚至撕扯衣服…而雅思考试恰恰相反，考场门外走出的考生，除了想立刻找个枕头睡一觉之外，绝对不会有其他心情。
别问我为什么，如果你考过雅思，就知道撕掉复习题，或者考前资料那是多么愚蠢的行为，因为极有可能下一次你还得接着考。
而往往没达标的烤鸭，都是在写作上翻船的。
最常听到的问题是，雅思写作到底应该如何写才能得高分呢，到底应该怎么展开逻辑才是合理的呢。
今天就为大家继续之前的话题，应该如何跟着高手的范文学习，才能帮你有效提高写作成绩。
今天讲的范文，同样是simon大神写的，题目是：
Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
范文学习第一步，先拆分后理解
background facts: more and more people read news on the internet
opinion: newspaper will remain the most important source of news
task: do you agree or disagree
请注意这里标红的most，这是本题的关键，更是许多人掉坑的关键原因。
你要问为什么?稍后回答你，让我们先接着往下说。
拆完题干之后，开始整理逻辑了，在看范文之前一定先理理自己的思路。
别偷懒不思考，这点思考时间是必要的，好好想想到底你的思路是什么，让我们先一起头脑风暴一下。
我的观点：disagree
我的逻辑：why? 为什么不同意考题的观点。
我的理由：
因为互联网越来越普及
互联网获取信息的速度和数量远大于报纸
报纸的阅读量正在下滑
老年人/落后地区的人们还在看报纸
传统媒体除了报纸之外，还有收音机和电视机
传统媒体最大的特点是：具有公信力，但同时消息实效性太差
报纸虽然衰弱了，但也同样是不可或缺的新闻渠道之一
请注意，在头脑风暴时不用过度追求理由之间的逻辑关系和顺序，只需要尽可能多的写出来就行。
然后再排列顺序和逻辑，让文章看起来结构性更强。比如：
报纸等传统媒体的优缺点：
报纸阅读量正在下滑
传统媒体除了报纸之外，还有电视和收音机，它们正在被年轻人抛弃
传统媒体最大的特点：具有公信力，实效性太差
报纸虽然衰弱了，但同様不可或缺
互联网的现状：
互联网普及度越来越高
互联网最大特点：时效性强，传播力大，公信力差
偏远地区和落后国家互联网还无法触及到
整理之后，文章结构也就出来了。写完全文你就很有思路了。
接下去我们一起看看simon大神怎么写的
上面重构的金字塔结构，是根据simon的范文重新整理后所得。看完这个结构，相信你迫不及待想看看看到底范文怎么写，别急朋友们，这就为你们奉上。
The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place to find information about what is happening in the world. I believe that this trend will continue, and the Internet will soon be just as important as the traditional press.
On the one hand, I believe that newspapers will continue to be a vital source of information, even in the Internet age. Firstly, newspapers are the most traditional means of communicating the news, and not everyone wants to or is able to use the Internet instead. For example, old people or those in rural areas might not have the ability or opportunity to get online, while many of us simply prefer newspapers even if we do have Internet access. Secondly, newspapers can be trusted as reliable sources of news because they employ professional journalists and editors. Finally, many people like the experience of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at a computer screen.
However, the Internet is likely to become just as popular as newspapers for a variety of reasons. The main reason is that it allows us much faster access to news in real time and wherever we are, on different gadgets and mobile devices. Another key benefit of online news compared to newspapers is the ability to share articles, discuss them with other people, give our views, and even contribute with our own updates on social media. For example, there has been an explosion in the use of platforms like Twitter and YouTube where anyone can share their news and views. A final point is that this source of news is less damaging to the environment.
In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source of news, because I believe that the Internet will soon be equally important.
用这个方法学习范文，保证事半功倍，至少不会像平日一样，浅浅看完了事。
还记得前面提到的most吗，考题里指出报纸会是最重要的消息渠道，而互联网不是。所以无论观点正反，都要围绕这个most而展开。
