- 2017年08月02日10:14 来源：小站教育作者：小站雅思编辑
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In some cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you thinks the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?在某些城市，规划者将商业，学校，办公和居家分隔在不同的区域里。优点是否大于缺点。
paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。
paragraph 2: 论述反方观点，即此举会加重交通负担。结合假设论证，具体举例展开论述。
paragraph 3: 论述自己的观点，即从住宅，商业和企业发展的角度来列举此举的优点。
paragraph 4: 总结自己的观点，且提出关于学校建址的建议。
In modern cities, people’s way of living and working has dramatically changed. In an attempt to satisfy the demands of growing population and tackle problems emerging from city life, urban planners are deciding to locate shops, educational institutions, workplaces and residential real estates in separated areas. As far as I am concerned, it does function effectively.
Opponents do insist that this practice aggravates the traffic burden. It is understandable that if those facilities are respectively situated in one certain district, how crowed it would be. Imaging that in peak hours, thousands of school buses or private cars carrying students are driven to the same direction; subways crowed with hurried office workers run the same route. Obviously, it is unwise to implement this plan as it increases the possibility of traffic congestion, which has already been a tough issue in most megacities.
However, there are some benefits that cannot be ignored, the most rooted of which is that the citizens ‘general satisfaction of life has been enhanced. To be specific, dwellers are more likely to live in a quieter and greener environment as there is less noise from busy streets but more room for trees and gardens. In addition, being away from skyscrapers or high-rises that remain us of a fast-paced life, homes will be more of a place for leisure and happiness. What’s more, the centralized commercial district provides convenience to consumers since there is no need for them to go shopping for different items around the city. Instead, they could purchase their fancy shoes or pick up the most charming dress in a place. Last but not the least, resource sharing and win-win mode can be easier to achieve between enterprises. A case in the point is that when a manager of Development Department in a training center intends to develop online courses, his potential cooperative partners may work in the IT company upstairs.
In conclusion, I believe that this is the future metropolis’ development tendency due to the fact that it facilitates inhabitants’ daily life and new pattern of business. Certainly, schools are better not to be constructed far away from housing estate; otherwise, students would suffer a lot on the way to schools.