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9分考官级雅思大作文范文之企业社会责任

2017年08月07日10:11 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:本文出自考官级作者之手,同意与否题型,讨论企业是否应当负起社会责任。对于这种级别的雅思写作范文,大家可以学习的地方很多,行文结构,观点句表达,用词,行文过渡方法。如何用尽量少的字数圆满地完成写作的各项指标。

本文为大家带来雅思写作范文,题目是As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?除了赚钱,企业还有相应的社会责任,同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

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范文:

Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.

On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.

On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.

In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.

(285 words, band 9)

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