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9分考官级雅思大作文范文之重复犯罪

2017年08月07日14:06 来源:小站整理
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摘要:本文出自考官级作者之手,two part题型,讨论对惯犯的成因与解决方法。对于这种级别的雅思写作范文,大家可以学习的地方很多,行文结构,观点句表达,用词,行文过渡方法。如何用尽量少的字数圆满地完成写作的各项指标。

本文为大家带来雅思写作范文,题目是Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?重复犯罪的原因和解决方法。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

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A large number of criminals who serve their first prison sentence, leave prison only to reoffend. This is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty finding regular employment once released. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with criminals who reoffend.

Firstly, the reason for most first-time offenders committing crimes again, once they have been released from prison, is due to the lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to retrain and learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of correct moral behaviour and instead mix with other criminals, which only strengthens their criminal intentions. Secondly, repeat offending is also owing to the difficulty in finding employment after being released. As a result, many of them struggle financially which leads them back to crime, regardless of the consequences.

There are two effective solutions to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job after they have served their sentence. By doing this, it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means of supporting themselves financially. Another method of dealing with criminals who reoffend is to have more supervision and checks in place when they are back in society. This solution would hopefully prevent them from taking any chances and deter them from reoffending because they are being so closely watched.

In conclusion, having training in prison and also close observation when first time offenders are released are effective in dealing with the issue. If governments implemented these solutions, crime figures would soon drop.

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