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2017年8月26日雅思写作考试真题范文

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摘要:为大家带来8月26日雅思写作考试真题范文。本次大作文考的是教育类话题,同意与否题型,探讨大学生如何兼顾学业学习和其他活动。请看小站版范文,范文来自小站范砚秋老师。

Full-time university students should spend a lot of time in studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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本文是一篇教育类的文章,题目中给出了一种观点,学生在专注学业的同时还应该重视课外活动,问同不同意这种观点。笔者赞成了这种观点,并在首段表示了赞成,接下来主体段分别从两方面去分析。第一个主体段先论证了努力学习专业知识的必要性:人类已经步入知识经济,只有努力学习专业知识,才能面对将来工作中面临的专业问题。文中用了举例和对比论证,如果一个医学院的毕业生没有在学校好好学习专业课,那么他将来在给病人的治疗过程中会面临重重困难。相反如果,一个大学生专业知识学的好,那么他在就业市场中会更受欢迎,因为这不仅代表了他专业知识过硬,还显示他学习能力也很棒,有潜力。第二个主体段从参加课外活动的角度去分析,现在职场中面临的情况越来越复杂,只是专业只是好的话会显得捉襟见肘,所以应该去通过课外活动锻炼一下自己的其他能力,比如沟通能力,团队合作能力和领导力等。这样,他们将来找到好工作的可能性会更大。最后一段,总结全文,学生需要好好学习专业知识,但参加课外活动也是一件不容忽视的事情。

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Nowadays, college students tend to spare more time and energy on their academic study and at the same time lay less emphasis on some extracurricular activities. From my point of view, this is a positive trend.

Firstly, as human beings have entered an era of knowledge-based economy, the more college students learn, the better they prepare for the future. [j1] The specialized knowledge they learn in university will play a key role in their future career. For instance, for a student majoring in medical science, if he does not apply himself to his major, he will meet a number of problems during the treatment and consequently, it is unlikely for him to become a prestigious doctor in the future. By contrast, regarding to students excellent academic attainment, they are more popular in the workplace since their conspicuous transcript is proof of not only their hard work but also their potential in learning, which is extremely significant for future work.

On the other hand, excellent school performance is far from enough for university graduates, considering the increasingly competitive job market. The situation in real tasks has become more and more complicated, which is difficult for graduates to handle if they are weak in other abilities. [j2] In this case, taking part in some activities during college is a perfect approach for them to understand the complexity in real work and to enhance capacities like communication skills, teamwork spirit and leadership ability. Students engaging in activities tend to have an edge over others who only concentrate on study and they are more likely to find decent jobs after graduation.

In conclusion, I believe in order to become well-rounded individuals, academic study is needed but participating in some extracurricular activities cannot be ignored.

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