2017年9月30日雅思写作考试大作文范文

2017年10月10日09:06 来源：小站教育作者：小站雅思编辑: 参与（11）阅读（9025）

摘要：为大家带来9月30日雅思写作考试真题范文。本次大作文考的是社会科技类话题，探讨了因特网时代带来的在家办公与上学的现象是好还是坏。请看小站

In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

真题传送门：2017全年雅思写作真题范文大汇总（第一时间更新）

本文是一篇教育类和科技类结合的题目。近年来，话题之间的交叉和结合已经成为趋势，同学们要注意。题目中给出的是一种现象，由于互联网的出现，人们可以在家工作或上大学。题目问的是这种趋势的好处是否大于坏处。

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In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, with the advance of technology, people have easy access to the Internet, which makes working or studying at home realizable. From my point of view, I believe the merits of this trend outweigh the demerits.

The first and most immediate concern that comes to people’s mind is that excessive exposure to computers is detrimental to people’s health. To be specific, for many people, for example, students, they may spend their leisure time playing computer games or watching TV and in this case, if they study at home through the internet, sitting in front of the screen for hours, it may give rise to a range of health problems like myopia and obesity.

However, there are more benefits. The most obvious advantage is saving time. The traffic is becoming increasingly crowded these days and it costs working people amounts of time on the road. If they can work at home, commuting will not be a problem and people can use the time saved to develop their personal interests, which can contribute to the well-being of individuals.

Apart from this, it is more flexible to work or study at home.

For students, instead of attending lectures and seminars at fixed time, they can download them from the internet and watch them whenever they have time and energy. For people in the workplace, they do not have to wear suits or high heels all day; they can wear casual and comfortable clothes when working.

In conclusion, although people may suffer from some illnesses, this problem can be remitted through some physical activities in the weekends and at the same time, working or studying at home does boost efficiency and brings convenience to both students and employees.

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the widespread use of ………的广泛使用

outweigh比……重要;超过

the advance of technology科技的进步

realizable可实现的

the merits of ………的长处

demerit短处，缺点

excessive exposure to computers过度接触电脑

be detrimental to …对……有害

leisure time业余时间，闲暇时间