10月21日雅思写作真题大作文范文
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10月21日的雅思考试已结束,现在为大家带来最新雅思真题原创高分范文,含详情解析和语料。
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政府类 |
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题目
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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. |
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范文解析 |
本文属于社会类和政府类的交叉话题,讨论内容涉及了年轻一代人担任政府要职是否合适。如果考生平时不太关注政治时事的话,思考论点时可能会遇到一些阻碍。此外,本文的语句表达也是一个难点,关键在于词汇的积累和运用。所以,综合来说,本题难度不小。但这也是2014年的一个旧题,因此考生还是有必要时常阅读往年的真题范文,增加积累。 |
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文章结构 |
paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。 paragraph 2: 论述年长的人群担任要职的两大优势。(1.个人权威 2. 丰富的经验) paragraph 3: 论述年轻人的一些优点,以及其对于社会变革的好处。 paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点。 |
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高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注) |
experienced and sophisticated |
经验老道的 |
be assigned to |
被分配给… |
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political movements |
政治运动 |
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ideal candidates |
理想的候选人 |
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personal authority |
个人权威 |
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command one’s subordinates |
智慧某人的下属 |
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make coordinated efforts |
共同努力 |
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put forward |
提出 |
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stand on one’s tough attitude |
坚持某人强硬的态度 |
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halt the invasion of |
停止…的攻击 |
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creative mode of thinking |
创造性思维模式 |
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vigorous energy |
充沛的精力 |
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enterprising spirit |
进取心 |
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explore unknown |
探索未知 |
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assume responsibility |
承担责任 |
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cutting-edge knowledge and technology |
前沿的知识和科技 |
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conservative |
保守的 |
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calls for transformation |
需要变革 |
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the positions with authority power |
有权威权力的职位 |
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exert immense influence on |
发挥巨大的影响 |
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accumulation of experience |
经验的积累 |
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sustainable prosperity |
可持续的繁荣 |
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高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注) |
Some people contend |
有些人认为 |
All these prove the fact that |
这些证明了… |
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On the other hand, it is undeniable that |
另一方面,…也是无可否认的 |
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范文 |
In most countries, experienced and sophisticated politicians are assigned to be in charge of important positions in the government. However, as more young people are engaging in political movements, some people contend they are also ideal candidates for those positions. Admittedly, both sides are reasonable to some extent and I would illustrate both of them as follows.
On one hand, of course elder officials are equipped with more advantages in terms of personal authority and abundant practical experience. As is well known, in the government system, if a leader fails to command his or her subordinates to execute actions, hardly can they make coordinated efforts and the working efficiency of this department will be diminished as well. Apart from this, decisive and feasible proposals are always put forward by senior ministers. Take the former Prime Minster of Britain, Winston Churchill as an example. At his twenties, he joined the army and participated in the war that happened in Cuba, India and South Africa. It is the rich war experience that enables him to stand on his tough attitude to fight with Nazism, leading the British people to halt the invasion of Germany in World War Ⅱ. All these prove the fact that it is more likely for senior ministers to obtain the trust and support of public and they are always capable of coping with critical situations of a nation.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the younger generation is risky, open and has creative mode of thinking, vigorous energy and enterprising spirit. Besides, they dare to explore unknown, assume responsibility and have good command of cutting-edge knowledge and technology. These traits give young administers advantages over their conservative parents when a society calls for transformation.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, although youngsters may push some change through the society, they are not quite suitable for the positions with authority power for the reason that those positions deal with complex issues and also exert immense influence on the pubic, without years of exposure to political environment and the accumulation of experience, it is hard for them to make contribution to the sustainable prosperity of the society. 原创来自小站范钰红老师 |
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362 words |