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10月21日雅思写作真题大作文范文

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摘要:给大家带来10月21日场的雅思写作大作文范文,本文来自小站原创范文。真题真题:讨论年轻人担任政府要职是否合适,讨论两方观点并给出你的观点。请看高分范文如何运筹帷幄,抓住考官的心。

10月21日的雅思考试已结束,现在为大家带来最新雅思真题原创高分范文,含详情解析和语料。

大作文

类型

政府类

题目

Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文解析

本文属于社会类和政府类的交叉话题,讨论内容涉及了年轻一代人担任政府要职是否合适。如果考生平时不太关注政治时事的话,思考论点时可能会遇到一些阻碍。此外,本文的语句表达也是一个难点,关键在于词汇的积累和运用。所以,综合来说,本题难度不小。但这也是2014年的一个旧题,因此考生还是有必要时常阅读往年的真题范文,增加积累。

文章结构

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

paragraph 2: 论述年长的人群担任要职的两大优势。(1.个人权威 2. 丰富的经验)

paragraph 3: 论述年轻人的一些优点,以及其对于社会变革的好处。

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点。

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

experienced and sophisticated

经验老道的

be assigned to

被分配给

political movements

政治运动

ideal candidates

理想的候选人

personal authority

个人权威

command one’s subordinates

智慧某人的下属

make coordinated efforts

共同努力

put forward

提出

stand on one’s tough attitude

坚持某人强硬的态度

halt the invasion of

停止的攻击

creative mode of thinking

创造性思维模式

vigorous energy

充沛的精力

enterprising spirit

进取心

explore unknown

探索未知

assume responsibility

承担责任

cutting-edge knowledge and technology

前沿的知识和科技

conservative

保守的

calls for transformation

需要变革

the positions with authority power

有权威权力的职位

exert immense influence on

发挥巨大的影响

accumulation of experience

经验的积累

sustainable prosperity

可持续的繁荣

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

Some people contend

有些人认为

All these prove the fact that

这些证明了

On the other hand, it is undeniable that

另一方面,也是无可否认的

范文

In most countries, experienced and sophisticated politicians are assigned to be in charge of important positions in the government. However, as more young people are engaging in political movements, some people contend they are also ideal candidates for those positions. Admittedly, both sides are reasonable to some extent and I would illustrate both of them as follows.

On one hand, of course elder officials are equipped with more advantages in terms of personal authority and abundant practical experience. As is well known, in the government system, if a leader fails to command his or her subordinates to execute actions, hardly can they make coordinated efforts and the working efficiency of this department will be diminished as well. Apart from this, decisive and feasible proposals are always put forward by senior ministers. Take the former Prime Minster of Britain, Winston Churchill as an example. At his twenties, he joined the army and participated in the war that happened in Cuba, India and South Africa. It is the rich war experience that enables him to stand on his tough attitude to fight with Nazism, leading the British people to halt the invasion of Germany in World War . All these prove the fact that it is more likely for senior ministers to obtain the trust and support of public and they are always capable of coping with critical situations of a nation.

On the other hand, it is undeniable that the younger generation is risky, open and has creative mode of thinking, vigorous energy and enterprising spirit. Besides, they dare to explore unknown, assume responsibility and have good command of cutting-edge knowledge and technology. These traits give young administers advantages over their conservative parents when a society calls for transformation.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, although youngsters may push some change through the society, they are not quite suitable for the positions with authority power for the reason that those positions deal with complex issues and also exert immense influence on the pubic, without years of exposure to political environment and the accumulation of experience, it is hard for them to make contribution to the sustainable prosperity of the society.

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