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2017年11月11日雅思写作大作文原创高分范文及范文解析

2017年11月13日15:07 来源:小站整理作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:11月11日的雅思考试结束,本场考试的大作文范文可以说是非常应景了,网购(Online shopping))将取代商场购物(shopping in store)的趋势是好是坏?本文属于社会类话题,范文来自小站原创。

为大家带来2017年11月11日雅思写作大作文范文及思路详解。题目是Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?由于互联网的发展,现在很多人都不去商店而选择在网上购物。那么,这个趋势是好还是坏呢?详情请看小站原创雅思大作文高分范文及思路详解。

雅思大作文范文解析:本文属于社会生活类话题。讨论关于网络购物取代实体购物的利弊。考生在思考论点时应该不会存在困难,毕竟网购已经成为了现代生活的一部分。但是在处理好处或者坏处的论点时最好能够梳理出一个清晰的层次,例如商家或者买家角度。这样主体段的思路和论述能更加有条理。

文章结构:

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

paragraph 2: 论述网络购物的优点。(分为买家和卖家两个层面)

paragraph 3: 论述网络购物的缺点。(分为买家和实体商家两个层面)

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点以及如何避免缺点。

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2017年11月11日雅思写作大作文原创高分范文及范文解析图1

雅思大作文范文:小站原创

With the advent of internet, people’s way of shopping has been dramatically changed. Online shopping is thriving and taking the place of shopping in physical shops. Undeniably, both consumers and sellers can benefit from this tendency though several drawbacks can not be underestimated.

From the perspective of vendors, the budget for running business is diminished considerably for the reason that the rent for a shop online is quite cheaper and some are even free of charge; besides, there is no need for them to pay for utility bills. The most advantageous is that their commodities can be introduced to a wider range of people. As long as sellers launch new products, consumers no matter at home or abroad are able to search it by searching engines within seconds. In this case, they are likely to gain huge profits from the high sales of goods. As for buyers, it is achievable to purchase whatever they need without going out. Unlike the past, the only thing they need do is to pick out items and click the button for payment. Furthermore, they may easily compare the price and features of products, as well as find bargains, buying the ideal goods with less cost.

Conversely, there also exist some defects about this shopping pattern. To commence with, it may lead to irrational or excessive consumption. Shopping can be done anywhere at daytime or night, with diverse commodities available from the whole world. Under such circumstance, it is hard for consumers to resist the temptation and easier to buy something failing to meet their real demands. What’s worse, owners of physical stores are facing bankrupt. Statistics show that there were 22 shopping centers closed in Shanghai in the first half year of 2016. The consequent unemployment aggravates the burden on government.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned the boom of online transaction is unstoppable and irreversible and it boosts the prosperity of national economy. In an attempt to avoid unnecessary consumption, shoppers had better think twice before making decisions of purchase. (339 words)

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