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为大家带来2017年12月9日雅思写作真题范文之小作文：The charts below show the average age men and women retired in seven countries in 2004 and 2008.图标数据有关男女退休年龄的数据。
The bar charts compare the average retirement age of females and males in seven nations in the years 2004 and 2008.
From the chart, it can be seen that except for Italian women, females in other six countries retired at older age in 2008 compared with those who retired in 2004. Besides, the retirement age of French women was youngest at 58.7 years old in 2004 and 58.8 years old in 2008. By contrast, Swedish females did not retire until they were at the age of 63 year-old in 2004 and 63.5 years old in 2008, which was the oldest retiring age among those mentioned countries.
Regarding to men, apart from those in Italy where they retried at the age of 63 in both years, male retirement age was raised in other nations in 2008 and the biggest increase was seen in the figure for males in Germany. It is interesting to note that the age of retired men in French was also the youngest but in Sweden the oldest.
Overall, it is noticeable that males worked for a longer period than females both in 2004 and 2008.(188 words)
From the chart, it can be seen that… 从图表中我们可以看出…
compared with 相比较
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the biggest increase was seen in the figure for… …的数据得到了最大的增长
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