2017年12月9日雅思写作大作文原创范文

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摘要：给大家带来2017年12月9日雅思写作大作文范文之社会类话题：有关城乡差距的影响及问题解决。对于本题中城乡差异导致的问题和解决方面考生应该不难想出，词汇和短语方面也主要是关于社会服务以及经济发展。总体来说，本题难度系数并不是很大。范文来自小站原创。

带来2017年12月9日雅思写作真题大作文范文，社会类话题，题目是：A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?原创来自小站范钰红老师。

1.范文解析

范文解析解析：本文属于社会生活类话题。其文体为说明文。考生在布局篇章结构时，可以对应问题确定主体段的内容。对于本题中城乡差异导致的问题和解决方面考生应该不难想出，词汇和短语方面也主要是关于社会服务以及经济发展。总体来说，本题难度系数并不是很大。

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2.原创范文

In the course of national economic progress, the imbalanced development between urban and rural areas has become a big concern for the authority, as it may give rise to a series of more pressing issues, which I would illustrate as follows.

Among those problems, the explosion of population in megacities is an inevitable one. Apparently, the sound public facilities and adequate educational resources attract a large quantity of people to flood into cities. Statistics show that in 2006, the total of residents in Shanghai ( a metropolis in China) was about 24. 20 million, of which approximately 40% of them were non-natives. Obviously, under such circumstance soaring house price and the heavy burden on traffic system are deemed as the consequent troubles. Most working class can hardly afford a private home or an apartment and traffic congestion is so common in every rush hour, demonstrating the urban infrastructure virtually cannot satisfy the demands of growing population.

What’s worse, this urban-rural gap may contribute to a vicious circle. As more locals swarm into large cities, the shrinkage of labour force in the countryside is worse, being an obstacle on the way to economic success. In consequence, the slow-paced rural economy renders the gap widens further.

In an attempt to diminish the gap, effective measures are supposed to be adopted and the first step is that the state should allocate more budget for the public service such as medical insurance, education as well as public transport in rural areas. Furthermore, the leading industries in countryside should be supported by government. For example, specific talents and high technology can be introduced to stimulate the agricultural development; historical experts can be hired to restore local cultural heritage so as to boost tourism industry. Only when public facilities were upgraded and local economy thrives, can people work and live in their hometown and the disparity between the city and countryside can be narrowed.(319 words)

3.文章结构

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题。

paragraph 2: 论述城乡差距导致的问题1(1.大量人口涌入城市以及其引发的问题)。

paragraph 3: 论述城乡差距导致的问题2(2.恶性循环)。

paragraph 4: 提出解决方法并总结。

4.高分结构

In the course of, … has become a big concern for… 在..的过程中，…已经成为了一个很大的问题

Only when, can… 只有当…的时候，…可以

5.高分话题表达

the imbalanced development between… and… …和…之间的发展不平衡

give rise to… 引起

the explosion of population 人口的爆炸