2018年雅思写作范文及思路点拨：年轻人无偿参与社区活动
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为大家带来的2015年7月4日雅思写作大作文真题：It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?本题为教育类话题，请查看范文详情：
雅思写作题目讲解
题目的类型属于一种观点里的利弊判断。话题类别属于社会与教育。这个问题中提到了两方面，既有young people 也有community，因此，在主体段中最好两方面都要有提及。
范文主体思路分析：
论点：利大于弊
利：
对年轻人：能学到技能，有助于在职场更好地发挥;还能增加对社区的归属感
对社区：能省下一笔钱做更多的事使社区变得更好。
弊：
对年轻人：会占用时间，影响学业
对社区：会面临组织的困难
雅思写作大作文范文
In recent years, it has become more and more common for societies to encourage young people to do unpaid work in the local community. In my view, the voluntary participation of youth brings more benefits to young people and community.
近年来，社会鼓励年轻人在当地社区从事无偿劳动的现象越来越普遍。在我看来，年轻人的自愿参与给年轻人和社区带来了更多的好处。
By doing unpaid work, young people can gain experience and exercise skills, which are helpful for their performance in the future career life. For instance, when they work with others and interact with people, they can enhance their abilities of problem solving, communication and teamwork. Also, young people will feel a sense of belonging to the local community through voluntary work, building unity and reducing distrust among members of community. To communities, with the help of young people, they can reduce the financial burden of the community. If communities employ professional workers to do the same work, a high cost certainly occurs. But now, local councils can do more in other aspects like updating sport facilities or supporting disabled people, with the saving money.
通过做无报酬的工作，年轻人可以获得经验和锻炼技巧，这对他们未来的职业生涯有帮助。例如，当他们与他人一起工作并与人交流时，他们可以提高他们解决问题、沟通和团队合作的能力。此外，年轻人将通过志愿工作、建立团结和减少社区成员之间的不信任而感到一种归属当地社区的感觉。对于社区，在年轻人的帮助下，他们可以减轻社区的财政负担。如果社区雇佣专业的工人来做同样的工作，那么高成本肯定会发生。但现在，地方议会可以在其他方面做得更多，比如更新体育设施或支持残疾人，以及节省开支。
Despite those merits of voluntary work, there are some potential drawbacks. Unpaid work might occupy a lot of time, which will lead to an obvious decrease in their learning efficiency in school or workplace. Besides, how to organize young people to work systematically is still a problem to local communities. Communities should avoid potential conflicts since these young people come from different social backgrounds.
尽管有这些自愿工作的优点，但也有一些潜在的缺点。无偿工作可能会占用大量的时间，这将导致他们在学校或工作场所的学习效率明显下降。此外，如何组织年轻人有序地工作仍是当地社区的一个问题。社区应该避免潜在的冲突，因为这些年轻人来自不同的社会背景。
From the above discussion, young people should be encouraged to do unpaid work since community service is good for youngsters’ future career life. Meanwhile, communities can save money to do something more beneficial to local community construction. However, there are still some negative points such as wasting time for young people and hard organization for community.
从上面的讨论中，年轻人应该被鼓励去做无报酬的工作，因为社区服务对年轻人未来的职业生涯有好处。与此同时，社区可以节省资金，为当地社区建设做一些更有益的事情。然而，仍有一些消极的方面，比如为年轻人浪费时间和社区的硬组织。
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