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2018年雅思写作范文及思路点拨:高中毕业生Gap year的优缺点

2018年03月19日16:47 来源:小站整理
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摘要:为大家带来的2015年11月7日教育类雅思写作话题:离开学校的学生在直接上大学之前就开始旅行或工作。他们的学习是优点多于缺点吗?School leavers go travelling or work before they go directly to university. Are there more advantages or disadvantages on their study?

考鸭们都知道,雅思写作话题有一个历史题库。本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文:School leavers go travelling or work before they go directly to university. Are there more advantages or disadvantages on their study?——2015年11月7日教育类雅思写作真题

2018年雅思写作范文及思路点拨:高中毕业生Gap year的优缺点图1

雅思写作题目讲解

主体段一:选择旅行和工作可以帮助他们更好地发觉自己的兴趣,决定未来的专业方向

主体段二:选择旅行和工作的缺点是工作任务很难接手,而且不连续学习容易分散精力,对以后的学习不好

雅思写作参考范文

Before the beginning of university, students who wish to continue with their education face two probable choice--either suspend their study for a year to obtain work and travel experience, or go directly into university. I will analyze the pros and cons of these two choices below.

在大学开始之前,希望继续接受教育的学生面临两种可能的选择——要么暂停学习一年,获得工作和旅行经验,要么直接进入大学。我将分析下面这两种选择的利弊。

A year’s time to work or travel before university has been popular among young people in recent years. In fact, students can obtain several good points by doing this. To begin with, students can enhance their life skills and maintain a balance between their studies and work from the one yeat experience. They will become more independent during this meaningful process. Also, they can identify career preference and areas of interests during travelling, which will help them to decide their major in university.

近年来,在大学前工作或旅行的时间在年轻人中很流行。事实上,通过这样做,学生可以获得几个好分数。首先,学生可以提高自己的生活技能,在学习和工作之间保持一种平衡。在这个有意义的过程中,他们将变得更加独立。此外,他们还可以在旅行中确定职业偏好和兴趣领域,这将有助于他们在大学里决定自己的专业。

However, one year’s work or travel also has its obvious disadvantages. Coming fresh out og high school, students do not have a clear understanding of the harsh realities of the world. They are not in a strong position to undertake early employment. Besides, young people are not able to make a correct career decision. Choosing a career requires sufficient knowledge of one’s own strengths, aptitudes and the trends in job market. Most young adults lack such knowledge. Moreover, travelling and working will divert young people’s attention from their previous objectives. If students give up the opportunity of being educated and pursue other ventures, they will lose their willpower to learn something carefully and patiently. The side effect of disengagement from schooling might not be significant in the first several years, but it will surly disadvantages them a lot in a long run.

然而,一年的工作或旅行也有其明显的缺点。刚从高中毕业,学生们对现实世界的残酷现实没有一个清晰的认识。他们在早期就业方面没有很强的能力。此外,年轻人不能做出正确的职业决定。选择一个职业需要充分了解自己的优势、能力和就业市场的趋势。大多数年轻人缺乏这样的知识。此外,旅行和工作将使年轻人的注意力从以前的目标转向。如果学生们放弃了接受教育的机会,去追求其他的事业,他们就会失去耐心去学习一些东西。在最初的几年里,脱离学校教育的副作用可能并不显著,但长期来看,这将会使他们长期处于不利的地位。

To conclude, work or travel before university has its advantages and disadvantages. In fact, the disadvantages outweigh advantages.

总之,在大学之前工作或旅行有其优点和缺点。事实上,缺点大于优点。

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