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2018年4月21日雅思大作文高分范文

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摘要:2018年4月21日场的雅思考试已经结束,小站雅思频道为大家带来本场雅思写作真题回忆及大作文高分范文。本场雅思写作话题有关:互联网时代一切都可以用网络而不需要面对面交流,你在哪种程度同意或不同意?本写作高分范文来自雅思哥。

小站雅思君为大家带来2018年4月21场的雅思大作文真题高分范文。本场雅思大作文话题有关有了互联网还需要面对面交流吗?原题:People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is it a positive or negative development?请看高分范文:

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雅思写作思路解析:

A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情 B 增加效率 C 给生活带来便利

A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情 B 减少公司运营成本 C 利润增加

A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情 B 人的社会技能下降 C 人觉得疏远,家庭和社区不再有团结的感觉

这个题目确定A。只是A有点复杂“使用网络,而不是面对面去交流、购物和工作”。如果你只写使用网络的好坏处(而没有不断出现面对面交流的字眼),就是跑题。

雅思写作高分范文:

Nowadays, many daily tasks can be accomplished without us meeting other face to face. Generally, I tend to believe it leads to many desirable resuits.

It is evident that fulfilling some tasks over modern technologies such as the Internet and other computer networks is highly efficient. In the past, if people had the need to do shopping, they had to go to the shopping mall; but today, all can be done with the click of a mouse and the goods will be delivered home, even at a lower price. Also, we used to need to go to the bank and wait for a desperately long line if we wanted to make a transaction from one bank account to another: instead, now we may comfortably make use of the self-service banking at home. Actually, almost all banks and financial organizations are well-connected to the Internet, which promotes the development of international trade and world economy dramatically.

Thus, obviously, the efficiency of life has been improved significantly due to the technological advances.

However, that is not to say that lack of face-to-face communication brings about no problems. One of the biggest concerns is safety. With the increasing virus threats and well-trained hackers, online deals are well exposed to all kinds of risks and losses, for example, the wide-spread problem of identity theft. Therefore, when making the most of the desirable changes brought about by technology, we should be aware of its potential downsides and find a way to minimize the negative impacts.

Overall, there are both favorable and unfavorable effects on individuals and society if everyday tasks are performed without the need of seeing each other. But I am quite optimistic about its future, and I think people and countries alike will benefit from it on a new level soon.

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