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2018雅思写作真题范文讲解 无偿工作

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摘要:本文将分析一篇社会类题材的雅思作文,是关于是有应该强制让青少年义务参加社区劳动。文章整理其相关话题词汇,整个的行文正反观点,更重要的是带来前雅思考官的一篇范例作文。

2018最新雅思写作话题分析之Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree?有人认为所有的青少年应该被强制在他们的空闲时间做免费工作来帮助当地的社区。他们相信这样做既有利于青少年又有利于真个社会。你同意与否?

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雅思写作高频词汇-志愿工作unpaid work

work on a volunteer basis 志愿工作

force all teenagers to do unpaid work 强迫所有青少年做没有报酬的工作

under enough pressure 承受足够的压力 the added responsibility 额外的责任

as demanding as a full-time job 跟全职工作一样要求很高

exam revision 考试复习 on top of attending lessons 在参加课程之外

have some free time 有空闲的时间 enjoy free time with their friends 和他们的朋友享受空闲时间

has nothing to gain 没有任何可获得的东西

obliging young people to do unpaid work 强迫年轻人做免费的工作

go against the values of a free and fair society 违反自由和公平社会的价值

do something against their will 违反他们的想法

lead to resentment amongst young people 导致年轻人的憎恨

raise their children 养育他们的孩子 nobody is forced to volunteer 没有人被强迫做志愿者

the best system 最好的系统 work for free 免费工作 make this compulsory 把这变成义务性的

雅思写作思路-志愿工作unpaid work

开头段

1. 许多人会选择做志愿工作。并且这对个人和社会整体都有益处。

2. 然而,我不认为我们应该因此强迫所有青少年做志愿工作。

主体段一

3. 大多数青少年在额外的工作之外,已经承受足够的学习压力。

4. 学校学习跟全职工作一样要求很高,并且老师们要求学生在每天上课之外做作业和准备考试。

5. 当年轻人确实有空闲时间的时候,我们应该鼓励文章来自老烤鸭雅思他们与他们的朋友共同度过,或者做做运动和其他娱乐活动。

6. 当他们完成自己的学业之后,他们有多年的工作要做。

主体段二

7. 同时,我不认为社会可以从强迫年轻人做志愿工作中获得任何好处。

8. 事实上,我认为强迫一群人做一些他们不愿意做的事情有悖于一个自由、公平社会的价值。

9. 这样做只能引发年轻人中的憎恨,因为他们感觉自己被利用了,或者招致父母的厌恶,因为他们不想被教导如何养育自己的孩子。

10. 现在,没有人被强迫做志愿者,而这也确实是最好的系统。

结论

11. 总的来说,年轻人可能选择免费工作或者帮助他人,但在我看来,我们不应该把它变成一项义务。

附一篇前雅思考官的范文

Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.

At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.

In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.(刚刚好250 words, band 9满分级别)

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