7月28日雅思写作范文分享-同意与否题型

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摘要：7月28日雅思大作文范文新鲜出炉。本次写作考的是犯罪类与教育类相结合的话题，旧题一道，讨论已做了好公民的的前犯人是否是教育青少年关于犯罪的危害性的最好人选。请看熊猫版本的范文。5段式，273词。

2018年7月28号雅思写作真题话题：Some people who have been in prison become citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?已经成为良好市民的ex-prisioner，是最合适的人选，来教育学生关于犯罪的危害么？

雅思写作话题分析：

看到题目中说the best，作为一个极限词，当然会本能的反对。这个词也算是该话题的题眼。

承认former prisoner的优势：

自己经历有说服力

不觉得former prisoner好：

家长也可以教育孩子啊，孩子不会觉得害怕

警察也可以，了解法律的细节更多

所以，立场也就有了，肯定它的一部分作用，但认为还有其他不错的方式来教育孩子。

参考雅思范文：

Some people believe that people who used to be prisoners are the best people who can persuade students to comply with laws. However, I cannot agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, rehabilitated offenders can share their experience in prison with students. For people who committed crimes impulsively, most of them feel regretful for their behavior, and from their stories, students can learn the consequences of committing crimes. For example, criminal records will make it difficult for people to reintegrate into the society. Nevertheless, there are better roles who can educate students on the topic of crime more effectively.

To begin with, parents may have a deeper impact on students. After all, not all people have a positive image of ex-prisoners, and some students are even afraid of them. However, parents have a more intimate relationship with their children, and most children will listen to what their parents say. Therefore, letting rehabilitated prisoners give speeches may make students frightened, while parents can educate their children in a more acceptable way.

In addition, inviting policemen is also an optimal choice. Compared to former prisoners, policemen are more familiar with laws, and they can tell students some details about laws. For example, students can realize that friendship is no more important than laws, and helping friends sell drugs also violates the law. Then, students can have a better understanding for obeying laws, including what they can do and what they should not do.

To sum up, parents and the police are better choices for educating students about the consequences of committing crimes, considering that parents are close to their children, and the police know details of laws.

可见雅思写作的三段式框架：导入结尾各位一段，短小精悍，中部是主体部分，真材实料。

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