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社会/教育类雅思写作话题Some people say modern children's games do not develop a wide range of skills , while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?现代游戏不能广泛培养孩子的各种能力，而传统游戏则在这方面做得更好，同意与否?
本题属于常见的argument提问方式，虽然“游戏”对大多数考生都不陌生，但越是熟悉的，越小心argument fallacy&irrelevant exemplification，以免被评卷人下狠手。题目出现明显的traditional games 和modern children's games，请考生留意reasoning trap。要特别注意CC;topic，main idea ,和support sentence 的相关性。
The mainstream view of gaming has become less curmudgeonly in recent years;we no longer regard games as a horrible evil demon trying to corrupt our children. However, there is a divergence of people’s opinions about whether traditional games are more likely to foster children’s skills than the modern games
Undeniably, in the contemporary life exist a few old games providing children with certain valuable skills that can hardly be offered by the modern consoles. Specifically, the vast majority of teenagers nowadays indulge into a series of virtual games online, such as electronic-based football playing, but never ever do those gaming attendees pick up the real skills like shooting on fields in reality, simply for the lack of exercise physically involved.
However, I firmly insist that current games give the young more chances to tap their potential capabilities to reap more profitable skills. The skills gained from the outdated games can be almost achieved in modern ones, as nowadays most traditional games like playing chess, and multi-player games are more accessible online. Thanks to the current gaming with less time and geographical restriction, teens are more likely to participate in, and sometimes lead, a more diverse, mixed-age team, enabling them to adjust to different surrounding.
More importantly, modern gaming is better in helping introverted children develop interpersonal skills and enlarge their friend-zone. Regardless of the gender, race, and religion, those children with mild learning disabilities can better express their personalities freely and even cooperate with others in modern video games.
Furthermore, Recent years have witnessed a large number of video games designed to serve the educational purpose. the cutting-edge technology gives the current gaming an advantage in its content and forms, which is largely conducive to language learning skills, in comparison with the old counterparts.by the integration of animations and sound recording into the current video games, children at an early age are more interested in and feel much easier to pick up a new kind of language, which all may be rarely realized in outmoded gaming.
In conclusion, from my perspective, the modern games that are constantly being updated and advancing so fast prepare children better to foster more skills than the old ones
范文原创自小站老师 江鹏(Daniel. Jiang) 325words
The mainstream view of 主流观点 less curmudgeonly 不那么狭隘了
a divergence分歧 indulge into沉迷
multi-player games多人游戏 be substituted by 替代
a diverse, mixed-age team多元化，年龄层复杂的队伍
enlarge their friends’zone.扩大朋友圈
with mild learning disabilities轻微学习障碍
the cutting-edge technology尖端科技
serve educational purpose实现教育目的
in the contemporary life exist a few old games 完全倒装
but never do they pick up 部分倒装
enabling them to adjust to different surrounding 结果状语
participate in, and sometimes lead, a more diverse, mixed-age team 平行结构
games designed to / exercise physically involved. 分词后置定语
which all can hardly be realized in ancient gaming.非限定定从
about whether traditional games are more likely to宾语从句
when children play video games in groups, 条件状语