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20170720雅思写作范文解析

小作文

类型

混合图

题目

The charts and the pie show the number of students at university in a particular European country, the government’s annual spending on each student between 1984 and 2009, and the percentages of students’ economic family background.


范文解析

本题是典型的混合型,两个动态图一个静态图,三种图形描述各自的数据,数据分布相对简单。注意每段开头的连接词,注意趋势的对比。

高分表达(范文中已用红色标注)

present how the proportion of…differed

显示了比例的不同

As is shown in the bar chart

从图表中可知

in spite of some small fluctuations

尽管有小的浮动

maintained a slightly upward trend until the peak was reached at…

保持小幅增长直至达到的峰值

In the last pie chartit reveals that…

最后一个图表揭示了

范文

The given charts illustrate how both of the population of university students in one European country and the public funds invested on each student per year changed between 1984 and 2009 and also present how the proportion of studens' families incomes differed.

 

As is shown in the bar chartthe amount of students studying in university generally maintained a slightly upward trend until the peak was reached at 400000 in the endin spite of some small fluctuations.

 

As for the line graphit indicates that the government funding for each student experienced an opposite trend with an overall sharp decrease from the original 14000 in 1984  to slightly less than 12000 in 2009.

 

In the last pie chartit reveals that more than half of students came from high income family while family with middle income accounted for the smallest with merely 22%slightly less than the low income ones26%.

 

In conclusionthere were more students receiving tertiary education even though the sponsorship from the government declined and most familieswith high and middle income can afford the tuition fees.

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字数

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大作文

类型

旅游类

题目

 

 

More attention is paid to being “responsible tourists” in order to preserve the cultural and environmental aspects of tourist places. However, some people think it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist” in the society. 

To what extant do you agree or disagree?

范文解析

本题讨论人们是否能够为保护景区的文化和自然环境做贡献。题目是To what extant do you agree or disagree类型,可以采用一边倒也可以采用双边讨论。需要注意的是,文中有impossible这个绝对化词汇,一般情况下,建议对于绝对化的说法持反对态度,并在文中提出possible ways即可。

其实本题的本质即为如何保护旅游景点的文化和环境,理解这点后本题就没有这么难了。题目中出现了culturalenvironmental 两个方面,可以以此为突破口,每个角度各写一段。本文以一边倒为例,讨论人们可以从文化和环境两个方面来做responsible tourists.

文章结构

P1:时代背景法引入话题+表明观点(不同意)

P2:从文化的角度保护旅游景点

P3:从环境的角度保护旅游景点

P4:总结(总结分论点+重申观点)

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

the prosperity of global economy

全球经济的繁荣

the advent of aquaticoverland and air vehicles

水、路、空交通工具的出现

the likelihood of…

的可能性

historical relics

历史文物

graffiti

墙上乱写乱画的东西

vandalism

故意毁坏文物的行为

cultural asset

文化财产

tangible cultural heritages

有形的文化遗产

intensive publicity

密集的宣传

policymaker

政策决定者

plaguing the local environment

破坏当地环境

uncivilized behavior

不文明的行为

make noise and litter around

大声喧哗和随地吐痰

watch one’s behavior

注意某人的言行

entity

实体

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

…significantly contributed to the boom of…

促进了的繁荣

the concept of… has gained popularity

的理念已经很流行了

…pose a great threat to…

造成很大的威胁

this problem can be settled through the positive participation of…

问题可以通过的积极参与来解决

increase people’s awareness of

提高人们的意识

effectively make a difference to…

产生有效影响

have long been accused of…

一直被指责

Worse still

更糟糕的是

pay little attention to…

不关心

This is when…comes into play

这是发挥作用的时候了

Driven by the fear of being punished,…

害怕被惩罚,…

范文

The prosperity of global economy and the advent of aquaticoverland and air vehicles have significantly contributed to the boom of tourist industry. Yetdespite the fact that the concept of conserving the tourists attractions environmentally and culturally has gained popularitysome are still questioning the likelihood of being an actual responsible visitor. From my point of viewthis query is implausible in neither aspect.

 

The preservation of cultural heritage involves efforts from media. Damage on local historical relics like graffiti and vandalism caused by tourists have posed a great threat to  cultural asset. Howeverthis problem can be settled through the positive participation of mass media. For examplelarge-scale educational campaigns have been launched in many countries and the documentaries and public service advertisements about conserving ancient buildingsobjects etc are also commonly seen in the media nowwhich is an effort made to increase peoples awareness of protection on tangible cultural heritages. That is to saythe intensive publicity would effectively make a difference to helping people become responsible visitors in cultural aspect.

 

As for the protection of natural environmentit largely relies on the policymakers. Travellers have long been accused of plaguing the local environment with their uncivilized behavior like making noise and littering around. Worse stillpeople seemingly pay little attention to signs standing next to them sayingQUIETorNO LITTERING. This is when the rules and regulations from the government comes into play. For instancefining those damaging the environment and rewarding the protectors have been conducted and seen as a good start. Driven by the fear of being punishedpeople would watch their behavior and remind themselves to become environmentally accountable visitors.

 

In conclusionpeople can become responsible travellers through the help of media and authoritieswhich are actually part of a larger entities that can train and supervise visitors.

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