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2017年9月16日雅思写作考试真题回忆

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2017916雅思写作范文解析

小作文

类型

柱图

题目

The chart shows the amount of wind power generated in four countries between 1985 and 2000

 2017年9月16日雅思写作考试真题回忆图1

范文解析

本题属于柱状图中的复杂类别。考生在处理数据时,需要多观察每个国家风能产量在20年之间的变化特征,找出重点数值和趋势变化,如1985 年和1990年印度和丹麦相等的数值,以及之后迅猛的发展趋势。此外,词汇方面由于风能的专有名词性质以及产量产生这两个单词的替换局限性,考生务必需要多替换句型使得语句表述丰富起来。

高分表达(范文中已用红色标注)

in the period ranging from…  to…

的期间

clean energy

清洁能源

reach a peak at…

到达的顶峰

drop to

跌落至

regarding to

关于

The following decade witnessed a dramatic growth in…

接下来的十年见证了的快速增长

the biggest rise was seen in…

发生了最大的增长

范文

The bar chart illustrates the megawatt of wind energy produced in four nations around the world in the period ranging from 1985 to 2000.

 

It is noticeable that Germany had always generated the most wind energy for the first 15 years and the amount of this clean energy reached a peak at approximately 1650 megawatts before dropping to 1500 megawatts in 2000.

 

Regarding to India and Denmark, there were 200 megawatts produced in both of them in the year 1985 and their figures both doubled in 1990. The following decade witnessed a dramatic growth in their amount and the output in Denmark finally exceeded that in Germany, with the highest figure of 1700 megawatts in 2000. As for US, the increase in this energy output was steady per five years.

 

Overall, it can be seen that the output of wind energy in three countries (India, Denmark and US) had been climbing during this 20-year period and the biggest rise was seen in Denmark.

范文原创自小站范钰红老师

字数

162 words

 

大作文

类型

社会类

题目

 

 

An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times in their lives.

Is it a positive or negative development?

范文解析

本文属于社会生活话题。文章要求讨论多次换工作和居住场所是否是积极或消极发展。考生在思考论点时应该不会存在太大的困难。如果是年级比较小的考生没有类似的生活经历可以联想到父母或者身边的案例,以此得出论点。词汇方面,文章需要考生积累一定量的工作方面的短语和单词,以便写作过程中能够灵活替换。

文章结构

paragraph 1 :重述题目,未标明观点,进行双方论述

paragraph 2: 论述跳槽的两个好处丰富工作经历②探索职业前景

paragraph 3:论述经常换住所的缺点经常重新找房子费用增加;经常换工作的缺点:混乱和不稳定,不会受到用人单位的青睐

paragraph 4: 总结全文,在换工作的同事做出成熟的考虑

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

shift occupations and dwellings

换工作和居住

a frustrating and fruitless experience

一段沮丧的和徒劳的经历

job-hopping/ job transition

跳槽/换工作

enrich working experience and skills

丰富工作经验和技能

job hoppers

工作跳槽

be equipped with

装有

competence

能力

explore one’s job prospect

探索职业前景

professional path

职业道路

career advance

职业发展

enlarge the circle of friends

扩大朋友圈

make the acquaintance of

交朋友

switch their residence

换住所

tenant

居民

be bound to

必然,一定要

inspect housing conditions

检查房子状况

dislocation and instability

混乱和不稳定

value the loyalty and integrity

重视忠诚和正直

mental development

心智发展

stress management

压力管理

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

In recent years, there has been a growing awareness among many people that…earns them a lot of benefits

近些年,人们越来越意识到给他们带来了很多的好处

A case in the point is that…

这里的一个例子是

Without…, hardly can…

没有很难

范文

In recent years, there has been a growing awareness among many people that shifting occupations and dwellings several times during their lifetime earns them a lot of benefits. However, if they are not prepared for problems airing from such practice, it would be a frustrating and fruitless experience.

 

There are at least two advantages of job-hopping and the first one is that job transition is deemed as a key to enrich working experience and skills. It is comprehensible that job hoppers have more chances to engage in various projects of different fields. In this way, more choices of job positions are available for them and they are equipped with competence in coping with challenges and risks. In addition, job changing is an effective way to explore one’s job prospect. Many job seekers are not clear of their professional path when undertaking the first job. Therefore, it is necessary for them to attempt diverse jobs until having a detailed plan for their career advance. As for merits of moving houses, enlarging the circle of friends may be the most obvious one. When living in a new apartment or community, it is more likely to make the acquaintance of neighbors.

 

However, it is a waste of time and money if people switch their residence too many times. As is known, tenants are bound to spend time viewing renting information online or newspaper, inspecting housing conditions as well as doing decoration and cleaning after moving into the new place. Apart from this, they have to pay the bill for the service of moving house. Similarly, frequent changing for job leads to the dislocation and instability. A case in the point is that HR manager may refuse to interview those who are used to working in one position only for a short period of time as the boss value the loyalty and integrity of his employees. Without stable work and income, hardly can they achieve the sense of general satisfaction with life.

 

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, although the shift of job and living places brings advantages in advancing career and improving social life, it is still recommended that one should be mature enough in terms of mental development as well as stress management before making this decision. 

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字数

377 words

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