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2017年10月21日雅思写作考试真题回忆

2017年10月23日15:44 来源:小站教育
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摘要:2017年10月28日雅思考试已经结束,小站教育教学研发中心王泓森老师和邹舒老师为大家带来最新,最快,最全的考试回忆。范文来自范钰红老师!

20171021 雅思写作范文解析

小作文

类型

表格

题目

The table shows information about the numbers of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009.

范文解析

此表格图形为99日的考试原题。横排数目比较多,竖列项目比较少。在确定写作思路之前,务必明确各项内容在不同年份的排名以及是否有相同或者差异之处,以便对比总结、确定写作重点。该表格切忌一味地描述各目的地国家游客数量在10年内的变化(由于都是增长趋势很难凸显重点)。

高分表达(范文中已用红色标注)

The table illustrates how the number of …varied in a period from… to …

图表显示了某段时期的数量变化情况

on the contrary

正相反

over a decade

十年间

prevalent destinations

主要的目的地

It is noticeable that…

显而易见的是

reach the fifth-ranking position

达到第五位

soared with above 150% of growth rate

涨了1.5

范文

The table illustrates seven destinations that Australian people paid a visit to and how the number of those tourists varied in a ten-year period from 1999 to 2009.

In the year 1999, New Zealand was the most popular country, with the figure of 500,700 travellers, which was followed by United Kingdom ( 400,000) and United States (300,000). There were over 100,000 people visiting Indonesia, Fiji and Japan. On the contrary, the number of visitors to China was only 86,000.

Over a decade, although the top three prevalent destinations remained the same, the situation of other countries had changed dramatically. It is noticeable that China gained more popularity, reaching the fifth-ranking position while the least people travelled to Japan, at 250,000. Fiji merely attracted 7,000 more visitors compared with that in Japan.

Overall, it can be seen that more and more residents in Australia travelled abroad. Moreover, the number of tourists to three Asian nations and Fiji had soared with above 150% of growth rate, especially for China, almost tripled in the ten years.

范文原创自小站范钰红老师

字数

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大作文

类型

政府类

题目

Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文解析

本文属于社会类和政府类的交叉话题,讨论内容涉及了年轻一代人担任政府要职是否合适。如果考生平时不太关注政治时事的话,思考论点时可能会遇到一些阻碍。此外,本文的语句表达也是一个难点,关键在于词汇的积累和运用。所以,综合来说,本题难度不小。但这也是2014年的一个旧题,因此考生还是有必要时常阅读往年的真题范文,增加积累。

文章结构

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

paragraph 2: 论述年长的人群担任要职的两大优势。(1.个人权威 2. 丰富的经验)

paragraph 3: 论述年轻人的一些优点,以及其对于社会变革的好处。

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点。

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

experienced and sophisticated

经验老道的

be assigned to

被分配给

political movements

政治运动

ideal candidates

理想的候选人

personal authority

个人权威

command one’s subordinates

智慧某人的下属

make coordinated efforts

共同努力

put forward

提出

stand on one’s tough attitude

坚持某人强硬的态度

halt the invasion of

停止的攻击

creative mode of thinking

创造性思维模式

vigorous energy

充沛的精力

enterprising spirit

进取心

explore unknown

探索未知

assume responsibility

承担责任

cutting-edge knowledge and technology

前沿的知识和科技

conservative

保守的

calls for transformation

需要变革

the positions with authority power

有权威权力的职位

exert immense influence on

发挥巨大的影响

accumulation of experience

经验的积累

sustainable prosperity

可持续的繁荣

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

Some people contend

有些人认为

All these prove the fact that

这些证明了

On the other hand, it is undeniable that

另一方面,也是无可否认的

范文

In most countries, experienced and sophisticated politicians are assigned to be in charge of important positions in the government. However, as more young people are engaging in political movements, some people contend they are also ideal candidates for those positions. Admittedly, both sides are reasonable to some extent and I would illustrate both of them as follows.

On one hand, of course elder officials are equipped with more advantages in terms of personal authority and abundant practical experience. As is well known, in the government system, if a leader fails to command his or her subordinates to execute actions, hardly can they make coordinated efforts and the working efficiency of this department will be diminished as well. Apart from this, decisive and feasible proposals are always put forward by senior ministers. Take the former Prime Minster of Britain, Winston Churchill as an example. At his twenties, he joined the army and participated in the war that happened in Cuba, India and South Africa. It is the rich war experience that enables him to stand on his tough attitude to fight with Nazism, leading the British people to halt the invasion of Germany in World War . All these prove the fact that it is more likely for senior ministers to obtain the trust and support of public and they are always capable of coping with critical situations of a nation.

On the other hand, it is undeniable that the younger generation is risky, open and has creative mode of thinking, vigorous energy and enterprising spirit. Besides, they dare to explore unknown, assume responsibility and have good command of cutting-edge knowledge and technology. These traits give young administers advantages over their conservative parents when a society calls for transformation.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, although youngsters may push some change through the society, they are not quite suitable for the positions with authority power for the reason that those positions deal with complex issues and also exert immense influence on the pubic, without years of exposure to political environment and the accumulation of experience, it is hard for them to make contribution to the sustainable prosperity of the society.

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