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雅思考试是一种针对英语能力,为打算到使用英语的国家学习、工作或定居的人们设置的英语水平考试。雅思考试分为听力、阅读、写作以及口语四个部分。雅思写作考试共计60分钟,包括撰写两篇作文即Task1和Task2,前一篇150字,后一篇250字。原则上建议考生前一篇作文用20分钟,后一篇用40分钟。



写作基本思路

Paragraph 1 开头段引出现代人们无论在外还是在家都感觉缺乏安全感这一现象;
Paragraph 2 阐明有两大主要原因,一是社会治安差、犯罪率高,导致人们担忧个人安全以及财产安全;二是人与人之间缺乏社交,不愿主动帮助别人,很多人即便在家也是缺乏沟通,而是沉溺于电子娱乐产品;
Paragraph 3 提出解决这一问题的有效办法:一是政府应当加强管理及提升法治,有效控制犯罪率;二是人们应当多和家人沟通,积极参加家庭活动;三是扩大社交圈,建立社区意识,创造良好的社会氛围。

参考:

开头段

A recent research conducted by Guangzhou Daily covering 38 cities shows that an increasingly number of people do not feel safe either go out or even at home. The following paragraphs aim to identify the contributing factors and set forth some effective measures.

第二段:

Nowadays, people do not feel safe either at home or go out for an array of reasons. As far as I’m concerned, there are two main factors. Firstly, public security is poor, making people suffering from insecurity. It is sad for us to admit that crime rate is still high, and people are worried about their personal security and property security. It is reported that last year there was a plague of robbery and housebreaking, according to the Xinhua News Agency. What’s more, people do not feel safe at home or go out also because of poor social interaction. It is quite common for us to see that people seldom say hello to each other, and also do not give others a hand when someone is in trouble. Even at home, a majority of people keep silence and are unwilling to talk with others, playing their own electronic devices.

第三段 :

What effective measures should we take to combat the problems mentioned above? As for the poor society security, firstly, government should strengthen management and improve law to combat crime. Secondly, as for the poor social interaction, it is better for us to engage in more family activities and communicate more with family members. What’s more, enlarge our social circles and build a sense of community is also important. Try to help others out of trouble if we can, and smile to each other, creating a good social atmosphere.

参考词汇:

set forth 提出
an array of 一些;大量
personal security 个人安全
proper security 财产安全
robbery 抢劫
housebreaking 入室行窃
electronic device 电子产品


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