2018a类雅思小作文9分范文分享 饼图题型之三地水用途
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关于雅思写作,网上流传着各色滥竽充数的范文,小编私以为,这些粗糙的范文的存在,是中国烤鸭雅思写作平均分低下的众多原因之一。是故小编浪迹网络搜集了前考官simon的雅思a类小作文共计41篇,全部是他常用的4段套路,字数一般不过200词,绝对是雅思写作范文里的一股清流,非常养眼。请看本文雅思小作文饼图题型范文,话题三地的水用途比较,全文共168词,9分级。
The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
该饼图展示美国圣地亚哥县,加利福利亚州和世界其余地方的用水比较。请作答。
雅思图表小作文饼图题型9分范文:
The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.
It is noticeable that more water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.
In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, a mere 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California respectively.
Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.
(168 words, band 9)
雅思小作文考官范文基本套路
段一:话题重述
段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律
段三:详述特征规律一
段四:详述特征规律二
注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,无定论。
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