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2017年9月9日雅思写作考试真题回忆

2017年09月15日17:22 来源:小站教育
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摘要:2017年9月9日雅思考试已经结束,小站教育教学研发中心王泓森老师和邹舒老师为大家带来最新,最快,最全的考试回忆。范文来自黄天枝老师!

20170909雅思写作范文解析

小作文

类型

混合图

题目

The table shows information about the numbers of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009.

2017年9月9日雅思写作考试真题回忆图1

范文解析

此表格图形,横排数目比较多,竖列项目比较少。在确定写作思路之前,务必明确各项内容在不同年份的排名以及是否有相同或者差异之处,以便对比总结、确定写作重点。该表格切忌一味地描述各目的地国家游客数量在10年内的变化(由于都是增长趋势很难凸显重点)。

高分表达(范文中已用红色标注)

pay visit to…

参观

the number of … vary in a period from ….to…

的数量在的期间内变动

prevalent destinations

流行的目的地

change dramatically

剧烈地变化

It is noticeable that…

值得注意的是

fifth-ranking position

第五位的位置

soar with above 150% of growth rate

1.5倍的速度激增

triple

增至三倍

范文

The table illustrates seven destinations that Australian people paid a visit to and how the number of those tourists varied in a ten-year period from 1999 to 2009.

 

In the year 1999, New Zealand was the most popular country, with the figure of 500,700 travellers, which was followed by United Kingdom ( 400,000) and United States (300,000). There were over 100,000 people visiting Indonesia, Fiji and Japan. On the contrary, the number of visitors to China was only 86,000.

 

Over a decade, although the top three prevalent destinations remained the same, the situation of other countries had changed dramatically. It is noticeable that China gained more popularity, reaching the fifth-ranking position while the least people travelled to Japan, at 250,000. Fiji merely attracted 7,000 more visitors compared with that in Japan.

 

Overall, it can be seen that more and more residents in Australia travelled abroad. Moreover, the number of tourists to three Asian nations and Fiji had soared with above 150% of growth rate, especially for China, almost tripled in the ten years.

范文原创自小站范钰红老师

字数

173 words

 

大作文

类型

政府类

题目

 

 

Some people think that any money spent by the government in supporting artist (such as painters, musicians and writers) should be spent on more important things. 

To what extant do you agree or disagree?

范文解析

本题为政府资金投资类话题。这一类话题难度系数相对比较小,只要考前阅读或者积累过相关范文和词汇、论点,那么答题过程会比较轻松,且更有可能运用到积累过的素材。对于题目中的关键词:more important things 考生需要给出解释或者具体的内容,以便在下文展开论述。此外,由于本题中有限定词“any”因此考生在表达观点时,务必明确观点偏向和行文结构保持一致。

文章结构

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

paragraph 2: 论述艺术繁荣对于社会和个人的好处。社会层面:1. 文明社会的财产和文化特色的象征。个人层面;1.提高艺术欣赏能力。2.缓解生活压力。

paragraph 3: 肯定反面,即其他方面例如医疗和教育对于公民生活的重要性。

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点。

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

an enlightened society

一个开明的社会

tax payers

纳税人

allocate public funds

分配公共基金

take … for granted

认为是理所应当的

artistic prosperity

艺术繁荣

devote themselves to…

把某人投身于

splendid painting

杰出的画作

impressive melody

感人的旋律

lyrical poems

抒情歌

be deemed as…

被认为是

advanced civilization

先进的文明

a symbol of cultural identity

文化认同的标志

sensibility to beauty

对美的识别力

enrich their spiritual life

充实精神生活

masterpiece

杰作

fast-paced work and life

快节奏的

guarantee people’s fundamental interest, benefits and rights

保障人们基本的权益

receive timely and accurate medical treatment

接受即使有效的医疗救治

equal access to education

平等的教育机会

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

I believe this assertion is one-sided.

我认为这个观点是片面的

To commence with

首先,

On condition that …

如果

Undeniably, it is also comprehensible…

不可否认地,也是可以理解的

It is the authority’s unshakeable duty…

是权威机构不可动摇的责任

范文

In an enlightened society, tax payers concern more about how government allocates public funds. Some of them take it for granted that financial support for artists is a waste of money as public services such as healthcare and education are of more importance. However, I believe this assertion is one-sided.

 

It must be admitted that artistic prosperity will surely bring advantages to both individuals and society. To commence with, without worrying about their economic conditions, painters, musicians and poets can devote themselves to the creation of splendid paintings, impressive melodies as well as lyrical poems. Apparently, those brilliant achievements are often deemed as valuable asserts of an advanced civilization, and a symbol of cultural identity. On condition that abundant art works are presented for citizens, their taste for arts can be cultivated and the sensibility to beauty can be enhanced, thus enriching their spiritual life. After all, a man does not live only by bread. Furthermore, appreciating fantastic masterpieces of outstanding artists releases modern people from high pressure of fast-paced work and life. Nothing can be compared with reading a verse - ‘ if Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?’ ( written by Percy Bysshe Shelley) in a depressing and hopeless situation.

 

Undeniably, it is also comprehensible for those who hold that priority should be given to public services that are closely relative to citizens’ welfare. Allan Wolf once said, ‘ The obligation of the government is to protect public health, safety, morals and general welfare.’ In consequence, it is the authority’s unshakeable duty to guarantee people’s fundamental interest, benefits and rights such as receiving timely and accurate medical treatment and having equal access to education.

 

In conclusion, although some aspects seem more crucial to the masses, there is no denying that art plays an indispensable role in relaxing people’s mind, improving their aesthetic appreciation and promoting social civilization.

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字数

310 words

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