【小站名师】妙用定语从句帮雅思写作加分
- 2015年03月27日16:54 来源：小站整理
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怎样写出优美句子——which的巧用（如何延长句子，无限续命，写出优美的长难句）
翻译练习：平等的教育能帮助解决学生学习成绩不好
l Equal access to education can help tackle educational underachievement
l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out(联想到被谁)
l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out by local authorities（联想到可否为主语）
l Local authorities should ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children. （最后再做补充）
which的巧用:还可以和不同的介词搭配，呈现更灵活丰富的表达
翻译练习：政府的职能包括扩大基础建设和创造更多就业以便于人们能够更幸福的生活
l The government function includes expanding the infrastructure and creating more job opportunities, with which people will be able to live a joyful life
l An optimized education system is destined to generate numerous ambitious minors, among which, the elites of our time will also be found
一个优化的教育体制注定会输出无数的有志青年，而在他们当中就蕴藏着我们这个时代的精英
小站名师美文中的宾语从句妙用
When the Indonesian Tsunami occurred, nobody was psychologically prepared for the upcoming disaster which eventually wiped out the entire shore and even the whole city.
例子的描述短小精悍，采用WHICH引导的宾语从句，配合小词wipe out的使用，让整个例子变得很形象生动
Although it’s unfair to lower the qualification for them, some counter-measures should be taken for the sake of a better pre-college learning which could enable them to compete with the urban students in the same platform.
让步语气+宾语从句的搭配，注意which指代的是better pre-college learning
The feeling and experience you acquired from the real places is visual and genuine, which will definitely give you a precious memory.
一句简单的宾语从句，但是从语义和逻辑上都很精炼
There is no denying that the creative artists could work as a lubrication when the social disputes and frictions occurred by entertaining people in an artistic and innovative manner, which, to some extent, will also start a new fashion trend or deliver breakthroughs to the realm of art.
经久不衰的“逗号战术”+好朋友“宾语从句”，无限续命
