2016年4月16日最新雅思写作真题大作文参考范文
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分享最新4月16日雅思考试写作大作文的一篇范文，这篇范文采用一边倒结构，表明作者在城市规划中首要建设购物中心的理由。文中给了2个理由证明自己的观点：1是购物中心可以给居民带来很多休闲体验，另一点是购物中心在室内，不收恶劣天气影响都可以很好的休闲放松。具体还是来看看范文吧！
Task：
There are more new towns nowadays. It is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer：
The rational plan for different functioning zones a city or a town before its construction is vital for its long term development. In many of the functioning zones, there is a discussion over whether the building of public parks or sports facilities should be more valued than the construction of the shopping malls, As a city dweller,I tend to favor the development some shopping centers.
If a town is planned for more shopping centers, Its citizens can have more access to a diverse life.Many shopping centers,under the influence of the advanced and trendy belief .are more than a place where the customers do Some shopping by splurging their money or there are assorted commodities In another word,shopping malls are the combination of many other public sports, in which cinemas, restaurants and even some small sized amusement parks can be introduced. Thus, With only the planning and building of the shopping malls,the residents can have more destinations to go to during their spare time,adding more spice to their city life.
Another merit for building the shopping centers that it can be less influenced by the external weather condition,which can ensure that citizens can enjoy their free time with less restriction.The public parks and some sports facilities are often exposed in open air,and people are likely to feel hopeless and upset if their recreational plans or body-building plans will be spoil by some unexpected events. By contrast,the shopping centers are modern constructions which free from the Influence of some natural influences.
To conclude,I am in favor of giving priority to develop the shopping centers,although other functioning zones such as parks and sports facilities are necessary to some extent.
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