2016年4月21日最新雅思写作大作文多版本范文语料汇总
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4月21日雅思写作大作文考的是关于环境的话题。“An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is this case? What can be done to reduce this problem?”随着消费品的生产增加，导致自然环境的损害。这是什么原因?我们可以做什么来减轻这个问题?关于话题，小站雅思频道汇总了多篇范文，供大家参考，希望对大家有帮助！
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Task：环境类题材，two-part question题型
An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is this case? What can be done to reduce this problem?
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1. 新东方版(257 words)
核心观点句：
The high demand of consumer goods has led to the depletion of natural resources as well as environmental degradation. How to reverse this situation should be paid more attention and both the government and individuals should take responsibility for this.
消费品的高需求导致了自然资源的耗减和环境的恶化，如何改变这一现象需要引起更多的注意，政府和个人都应为此承担责任。
2. 雅思哥版(267 words)
核心观点句：
I think the growing human population and consumerism are the main factors that lead to the depletion of natural resources, but both individuals and government can take actions to save our earth.
我认为日益增长的人口和消费主义是导致自然资源耗减的主要原因，个人和政府都需要采取措施拯救我们的地球。
3. 无名氏版(343 words)
核心观点句：
In sum, emission of some products and huge exploitation of natural resources for producing some products may account for why the environment is degraded. Governments should take the responsibility of educating the public to refuse items that do harm to the environment.
总的说来，一些产品的排放量和为了生产一些产品而巨大的开发利用自然资源，导致了环境的退化。政府应该承担起教育公众对环境有害的物品说no的责任。
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